At 17 and 88

He leans in; can’t hardly hear No matter; the great-grands dear The G-G-son responsive to speak The G-G-pop an antique Antiques are worth so much It is good to stay in touch One’s plans are far behind him The other’s just touching the rim The G-G-son responsive to speak The G-G-pop an antique Close, still, yet far away, and yet Life’s quite riveting, you bet One generation must clutch the torch It is handed off; a path to forge Somehow we live in one another With who we are in astute color The G-G-son responsive to speak The G-G-pop an antique
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Pettit Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 11:38 AM
Nicely written about the connection between generations.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Robert!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 5:10 PM
a joyful read...especially liked Antiques are worth so much It is good to stay in touch happy new year, Kim, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
December 31, 2025 at 3:56 AM
Thank you, Sara! So glad my dad is still here. Hugs
Gifford Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 2:44 AM
Hello Kim, The wonders of family, beautifully written, enjoyed the read. Happy New Year my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Happy New Year, Zyrool! Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 1:31 AM
Lively poem on G G relatives. Happy New Year.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2025 at 9:52 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Wolf Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 8:05 PM
This really tells the story of the ages. One generation declines; the other inclines. One door opens; another closes. The passing of the torch. Lovely, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 9:39 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon! Funny to be on this side of things. Hugs
Hind Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 5:24 PM
Things change in the blink of an eye- reminds me of the song "One Hundred Years To Live"- enjoyed this poem <3
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 9:46 PM
I just listened to the song. I think I remember hearing it before. Read the lyrics. Yup, as I approach…not quite that old but definitely at the wisdom age. Bless you, Paige and thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 11:45 AM
This is very good, Kim. And very meaningful. On couplet three I was almost thinking to say : because they're fragile, do not touch. Haha!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 9:47 PM
Wow, for sure. Hugs :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 8:49 AM
I remember my old boss once said to me as I said "Can't wait to retire" he said "Don't wish your life away, I've got less ahead than you" . Now I'm retired I often think of it. Happy New Year Kim. Tom
Dietrich Avatar
December 28, 2025 at 11:47 AM
But Tom, now you can hopefully just do whatever you want without restrictions of work schedules. I was forced into retirement this year when the school where I worked part time went bankrupt. I actually love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 4:58 PM
I bet! It is a different story. I retired 4 years ago and my husband retired a couple months ago. Happy New Year!
Rolland Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 10:33 PM
new generations don't really understand old ones, i guess, interesting penning
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Thank you, Yann! My Dad couldn’t really hear his great grandson but I love that my grandson was trying to converse with my Dad.
Aldana Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 8:48 PM
• Interesting • Entertaining
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2025 at 6:24 AM
Thank you, Keyonda!
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