Nette Onclaud Poet Pleiades

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Astronomy--Pleiades

Stunning tail-light of eve
Sweeps  across the heavens
Streaked with chrome blue tassels:
Swift the leap glossed by dust
Spin of Hailey's Comet,
Streams quickly... then fades off!


Pleiades Contest of Joseph May
10/6/2020

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JC Brul October 15, 2020 at 10:39 PM Spectacular imagery! Your pen never fails!

Reason A. Poteet October 12, 2020 at 8:50 PM Supreme Salutations on your first first placement in the pleiades competition, nette. Enjoyed how you used "S" for Stronomy, quite unique, as it is the way we pronounce it.

Kim Rodrigues October 12, 2020 at 4:02 AM Action-packed...the Hailey’s comet! Congratulations, Nette!

Krish Radhakrishna October 11, 2020 at 2:41 PM Congrats on your top win with a write on one of the most famous Comets that we know! lovely description too! well done!

Regina Mcintosh October 11, 2020 at 2:11 PM Lovely writing... A beautiful entry for a beautiful win :) God bless you sweet friend

Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2020 at 1:53 PM Beautiful S words you chose for this one, Nette. Congrats on top win.

Joseph May October 11, 2020 at 10:34 AM Very Nicely done Nette, Congrats on your win

Brandy Nicole October 7, 2020 at 6:52 PM "Stunning tail-light of eve sweeps across the heavens" Such a beautiful image you paint with your words. I love everything about Space. Your thoughts leave me in complete awe. :) Hugs, Brandy