Astronomers

Teleporting into your giant...galaxy 
Eclipsed in time...lost in outer space.
Jumping from start to star
While...holding one captive.

My love comets...yearning...your quaker body,
As...asteroids...attack my sensitive...soul.
A magnetic field...forces my decisions,
Drawing me to a darker abyss.
I gracefully...gravitate toward your love planet.

The captive...star illuminates my path,
Your moon beckons me to stop by and plant my flag.
I orbit your planet for a moment,
Radioactive pulsars...playfully signal,
For my astronomical...atomic landing.

I land on your constellation...beauty;
I touch and tame the milky...way.
Commencing to explore the black...hole.

We make love on a bed of stars,
Looking...like two stuck...satellites in orbit.  
My rocket’s fuel gage is full.
I’m about to blast...off.

T-minus: 10..9..8..7..6..5..4..3..2..1..lift off.
I’m shooting...stars...as you meteor...shower
And my mind goes into nova...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
April 27, 2009 at 10:34 PM
Nice work, steamy but great, I've had my mind enter nova many times.
Davis Avatar
April 17, 2009 at 11:49 PM
Nice work, steamy lines.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 3:19 PM
I blushed the second time I read it. That's when I realized how sensual it is. I'm too old to blush. LOL Your words and the flow are magical. The is excellent.
Guzzi Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 12:03 PM
Very different and a nice reach for you Raul. Congrads on your win in my contest!Light & Love
Weber Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 12:51 PM
Fun analogies playing in this one, Raul! The count down made me laugh until coffee came out of my nose! Warm regards, John.
Winter Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 12:50 PM
Ha ha too excellent! Love how your mind is working! Clever, clever write. Happy Easter Raul to you and yours. Love, Shar
Gass Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 8:36 AM
This is so well written, Raul! Love the creative theme and phrasing in this passonate piece. I have missed reading everyone and this just wowed me. Well done, my friend! Love, Robin
Strand Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 8:21 AM
Very imaginative and modern Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today
Goff Avatar
April 10, 2009 at 4:11 AM
cool!!!!!!!!!
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