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Astral Soul Palace Loves and Reveres Me

Magical mystical soul palace 
of my heart-felt dreams, 
Are you surreal as you seem?

Polar bear guards, watching as I sleep,
Turquoise opal turrets, 
with diamonds so deep.

Twinkling steps lavished with 
lights of lavenders and turquoise, 
glistening in my dendrite pond,

sprinkled with starlight magic, 
inspired by my night faeries,
Showing me love and light

Keeping me safe until daybreak
as my soul has split, and the part
that needs to travel is no longer in body

But the other part, 
nurtured by this magical mystical
soul palace, is having a fine rest indeed.

Feeling loved and revered.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/5/2019 7:22:00 PM
What a great surreal poem you have written here Caren. Such an imagination you have, my friend. I enjoyed the read....Peter
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/5/2019 10:00:00 PM
If it was not for my imagination, I would be lost, my friend.
Date: 2/5/2019 2:30:00 PM
Ooh, I like this place; love the "Polar bear guards", too.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/5/2019 10:00:00 PM
I saw a photo of the loveliest scene.
Date: 2/5/2019 8:49:00 AM
Hi Caren, You have a good imagination. And you have the ability to capture your reader's attention and bring them into that imaginary world. Is it real or imagery? That's how you make the intended reader feel. Great job:-) Alexis
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/5/2019 10:06:00 AM
That is how I feel often also,Alexis. Thank you my friend!
Date: 2/5/2019 7:54:00 AM
You write well using surrealism art. Great fantasy.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 2/5/2019 10:06:00 AM
Thank you Victor. My life is surreal sometimes.