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Astral Projection

Unencumbered by my body mass and girth I fly along at the speed of whim Unconcerned about physical attributes I can focus on the joy and beauty of my vantage point The world below and out in front of me, opens The world of noise and doubt inside of me, closes In this place of "betweens" I find solace In this place of "infinites" I find myself .......drifting.... .......yearning..... ...........growing. ****for the favorite mode of transportation contest****

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/9/2010 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations Jim on your win in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Your Favorite Form Of Transportation". Love, Carol

Brandee Augustus

Date: 8/8/2010 8:46:00 PM

Very nice! I liked the thought and imagination you put towards this contest. Congratulations on getting a mention for this piece!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2010 9:41:00 PM

I knew someone that said their grandma did this. I think it would be so wonderful to do too!! I envy you if you ever really experienced it! congrats in the contest. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/6/2010 8:24:00 AM

Now THIS is creative, Jim. Best one I've read for the contest. Congratulations on your success. Love, Carolyn (Daver Austin should read this -- he wrote a novel about astral projection)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2010 9:48:00 PM

Congrats on your HM win, Jim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 9:35:00 PM

Congrats Jim on your HM in BG's contest with this super write on Astral Planing.. fabulous concept and all too true.. once u have tried it.. enjoy your special honor with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/5/2010 9:32:00 PM

Different and I like that. Congrats and thank you for participating in my contest. BG