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Astral Attendees

On their couch through mirror he saw sun and moon and all astral beauties glare agape at them while forgetting their worldly tasks, claiming they do their work by serving them.
inspired by John Donne's "The Sun Rising" Oct. 8, 2020 Double Tetractys 4 Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper

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Date: 10/17/2020 2:43:00 PM
Your imagery is beautiful, Newton. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Eve's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/17/2020 5:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan, for this great comment!!
Date: 10/16/2020 7:21:00 PM
congrats on your win. It's cool to see a John Donne inspired poem!
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Date: 10/16/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, for this lovely comment!!
Date: 10/16/2020 8:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on a lovely 2nd place in the contest, Newton :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/16/2020 7:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your revisit and the sweet comment!!
Date: 10/15/2020 7:28:00 PM
Very nice Newton! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/15/2020 7:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda, for your lovely comment!!
Date: 10/15/2020 6:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Newton. Thank you for participating in my Tetractys contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/15/2020 7:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, for your great comment and the placement!!
Date: 10/8/2020 4:00:00 AM
- Great done for this contest, Newton ... best wishes for a top win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/8/2020 4:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this wonderfully great comment and the kind wish!!

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