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Astral Ash

I will not have a carved tombstone;
the wind will carry me.
I've stayed in one place long enough;
one place, one form, one old tome.

I will not lie beneath the soil,
and compost for you see;
I've stayed in one place one enough
on the wayward wind I'll be.

Astral ash, silvered cinders, see
the hills crest, the vale deep,
the tallest pines won't be enough;
snowcovered peaks; be my home.

The jungles deep will shelter me
in flowers rouge, I'll roil.
I've stayed in one place long enough.
I'll ride rapids to the sea.

Not in a crypt, nor box, nor vase
none of them for I decree;
I've stayed in one place long enough
the brash wind will carry me.


* Dedicated to Andie & Fredrick for the inspiration.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rundle Avatar
March 5, 2015 at 6:58 PM
Very easy to get a peaceful sense of passing on in this. Great work Debbie. Shane
Anish Avatar
December 6, 2014 at 10:32 PM
A unique piece here. You provide an answer to the movie "Sleeper" Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Lamoureux Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 12:15 PM
I think you might appreciate my Ashes poem. My step dad was cremated and I love how my mom has honored his passing. I enjoyed this write thoroughly.
Fraser Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 3:24 PM
Terrific read Debbie. Me, I want to be like the Kansas track 'Dust in the Wind' - James :)
Callus Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 8:55 AM
I love a poem that is able to provide points for discussion; we all have a choice (while we're still alive!), but finally it all depends on others. Flying with the winds gives such a liberating feeling...a true sense of freedom. // paul
Richards Avatar
November 6, 2014 at 4:42 PM
Ahhh Deb !! As I said before, this poem generates many thoughts, and while many people differ on what is right for them...it speaks to what I would want. We should both print this out and send to all our loved ones!! :) While I'm here again, I'm extremely proud and pleased that you liked my poem for your contest! What a lovely way to brighten my day! Thank you so much!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 2:02 PM
This is so ethereal and beautiful Deb!
Richards Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 9:58 AM
I have had so many discussions with so many people, on this very subject. So many wishes, different opinions on how others feel about this delicate choice.... I'm with you......... you write a marvelous poem that says it well !
Guzzi Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 10:12 AM
well not that we have any choice at that point in regard to whether they listen to us BUT at least they won't be able to say we didn't tell them!
Kendrick Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 5:21 PM
Interesting concept..Very well written work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Mcdaid Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 8:40 PM
beautifully painted debbie love how you crafted this pen dear friend
Squyres Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 3:47 PM
Astounding write and love the topic !! Excellent word choice for the theme !!
Helppi Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Nicely written poem Debbie
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