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To feel wonder arise, in carefree, vibrant dance, our void-centric presence surrenders to the flow, brought forth in innocence. To feel wonder arise, filling us with rapture, we embrace the thunder, humming, strumming, rumbling, rising from down under. To feel wonder arise, we follow love blindfold; each caress a surprise, as in-form nodes awake, on feeling bliss beats rise. To feel wonder arise, vaporise lower mind, heart pure like morning dew, porous and receptive, beholds God in full view. 24-June-2022

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Date: 6/24/2022 9:54:00 PM
Only a porous and receptive heart can hold wonder and God's grandeur in full measure ! A heart hard as stone can never yield to beauty or grace. Your words are like candle flame radiating eternal truths, Seeker friend !
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Date: 6/25/2022 1:14:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. So happy these words resonate in your glowing heart

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