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Asterope

A flash of lightning creates shades of trembling light interacts with shearing pain, as a fleeting moment cemented within a grievous mind a wrench of nostalgia, a reminder of you on that fateful day, where in the unsung meadow you lay in disheveled jade. 23/7/2020 Entered 'Just a moment' Poetry contest sponsor John Lawless

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Date: 8/6/2020 10:32:00 PM
Congratulations Harry on a wonderful piece. An explosive moment your words resonate with emotion. Stay safe my friend...
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Date: 8/5/2020 10:20:00 PM
Flashing with memories, memorable words and creativity, Harry. So glad to see it on the winners list! Congratulations!
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Date: 8/4/2020 3:09:00 PM
Harry this is excellent. Sorry I never saw it earlier. I am glad it appeared on the winners' list so I could see it now. Congrats , my friend
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Date: 8/4/2020 12:57:00 PM
Harry you've penned honest emotions in such a poignant manner that they touch hearts instantly. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 8/4/2020 6:25:00 AM
Wow you last two lines are so poignant ~ a FAVE for me, Harry. Wow ~
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Date: 7/25/2020 6:56:00 AM
What a moment you created my dear friend, all in a flash of lightening, but a moment you will remember and treasure forever! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/23/2020 2:27:00 PM
Absolutely stunning dearest, Harry. One couldn't portray better such a moment. Good luck my friend.
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Date: 7/23/2020 1:01:00 PM
The grief comes through so powerfully, Harry. You certainly created a "moment" you hold in your heart forever. BEst wishes in the contest, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 7/23/2020 10:39:00 AM
This is, indeed, brilliant, Harry. As an ex-teacher, I give it a grade of 'Wow! Awesome!' Fantabulous write! Stunned me. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 7/23/2020 7:34:00 AM
A brilliant write, Harry--I hear and see the moment you created in flash of lightening--image of Asterope in unsung meadows..in disheveled jade.
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