Aspen Leaves

Designed sapphires - I would fondly call them,
In red, yellow and variety green;
In shapes round, oval, heart-like diadem,
With white-red blood-vessels, tenderly seen;
Like rings and ear-rings of a charming queen,
Midst floors of forests blazing with sun-rays,
Like ballet dancers, in bright garbs you glaze;
Marveling at your mellow model-mode,
Not blinking their eyes wild birds and beasts gaze;
Breeze into magic melodies explode...!




30 October 2022
Dizain Poetry Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet
Theme: Nature
Content Title: Aspen Leaves
Syllables Counted at: howmanysyllables.com
Rhymes checked at: rhymezone.com
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 11:22 AM
So glad to see this on the list, Chris. Congratulations
Alex Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 6:54 PM
Thank you very much.
Canerdy Avatar
November 8, 2022 at 8:19 PM
Christuraj, a huge CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive poem. Great figures of speech! Janice
Delaney Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:30 PM
Congratulatiions. on your placement. Love the alliteration. SuZ
Alex Avatar
November 9, 2022 at 6:55 PM
Thank you very much.
Kavanagh  Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 4:19 AM
Congratulations Chris, on your top win, with a beautiful Dizain, how good is this sequence, from mellow model-mode, to magic melodies explode, superb creativity! cheers David
Alex Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:05 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Buehler Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 9:07 AM
Gorgeous images delight in this poem, Christuraj. Congratulations on a well deserved win. :)
Alex Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:05 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:15 AM
Congratulations, Christuraj, a beautifully descriptive poem.
Alex Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
George Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 5:53 AM
The leaves are picturesquely painted . Congratulations on your first place win, dear Chris !
Alex Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Pandit Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 5:15 AM
Congrats on your TOP win--enjoyed the poem, Christuraj.
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 5:26 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Daniel Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 2:17 AM
Awesome, simply magnificent write, Christuraj:)
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:10 AM
Thank you very much Jo. Hearing from you after long.
Agustin Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 11:45 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... I have learned another wondrous creation from God through your poem. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:11 AM
Thank you very much Beata. May God Bless You!
Gasun Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 7:02 PM
Thank you for introducing these beautiful leaves by your very wonderful and creative dizain my dear friend Christuraj! Congratulations on your well-deserved first place win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:11 AM
Thank you very much Len. May God Bless You!
Edmonds  Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 6:36 PM
A beautiful Dizain form poem Christuraj, aspen trees have pretty leaves and your poem certainly does them justice. Congratulations on your win in Sotto’s contest… Belle
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:12 AM
Thank you very much Belle. May God Bless You!
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 2:25 PM
Congratulations on this winning work in Sotto's contest. Way to go. Sara
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:13 AM
Thank you very much Sara. May God Bless You!
Peck Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 10:11 AM
A beautiful poem, Christuraj! Congratulations on your big win!
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:13 AM
Thank you very much Ann. May God Bless You!
Sands Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:43 AM
Congratulations for your great win :)
Alex Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:56 AM
Thank you Heidi. May God Bless You!
Poet Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:17 AM
Congratulations from the heart for winning the contest. You have composed such an excellent poem.
Alex Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Thank you, sir, for giving me an opportunity.
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 10:17 AM
wow, VERY pretty!
Alex Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 6:48 PM
Thank you very much for the encouraging words.
Sands Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 7:25 AM
Beautiful. Very nice :)
Alex Avatar
October 30, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Thank you very much for the encouraging words.
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