Asleep In the Blooms

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orange sun has gone yet still she sleeps in the blooms at purple twilight the day has grown old and where have the bluebirds gone a pause for sweet dreams the day's excitement coral dawn through frenzied noon caused a vanishing

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/17/2021 7:15:00 AM

Evelyn, This is a nice place to be this morning. -Richard

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/17/2021 9:55:00 AM

That's good to know, Richard. Thank you.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/16/2021 3:12:00 PM

WoW! Evelyn, You've described such breathtaking sleep in your lovely string of haikus. I enjoyed the view, my friend;-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/16/2021 5:20:00 PM

Thank you Alexis. Your enjoyment makes the effort so worthwhile. Thank you for the lovely remarks. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn ;)

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/16/2021 4:20:00 AM

Lovely poem, Evelyn ~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/16/2021 10:37:00 AM

Thank you, Line.

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/16/2021 12:20:00 AM

the orange sun was gone; brightest moon comes to make a deep sleep///

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/16/2021 10:38:00 AM

Thank you so much. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/15/2021 10:01:00 PM

Must have been a wonderful deep sleep. Mesmerising poem.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/15/2021 10:10:00 PM

Thank you for your delightful thoughts, my friend. :)