Asleep

When I’m asleep, I’m not in pain A respite from the constant rain A place that seems so far away From any darkened, dreary day When I’m asleep, my dreams are free I’m anything I want to be I’m anywhere I used to know There’s nothing that a dream can’t show And everyone that I’ve held dear That from this life, no longer here Is with me still, their smiles to keep Forever mine when I’m asleep Yet sleep, though lovely in its course With all it’s comfort to endorse Cannot alone bring back the sun While on this planet still we run We must stay in a forward flow While living still with time to grow And loving what there is to love And thanking what there is above When I’m asleep, I hope I’ll find Not only from the peace of mind Of knowing what there was to know But dreaming of where next I’ll go

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/8/2023 2:32:00 PM

I can feel a tinge of sadness,of loss of someone once held dear,I can feel the longing,the vision of the future,and the re-union ..I can feel the beauty of dreams,thw escape to the land of Oz,where everything is wonderful,everything is beautiful,and all of those we love and hold so dear,are near..Dreams-my favourite moments.A beautiful poem.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/10/2023 8:31:00 AM

Thank you Charmaine, you sensed exactly what I was feeling as I was writing this!! Happy Sunday xxoo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/21/2023 8:04:00 PM

Dream, believe, then conceive! ~ Sperm Producer. (Hey, Mike: Know any good 'Egg Producers' I can hook up with?!)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/22/2023 5:34:00 AM

If I did, the eggs ha e all been laid!! Thanks GW!!!

David Kavanagh

Date: 8/20/2023 3:37:00 AM

Nothing better than a dream, that one does not want to wake from Mike, they really are another form of reality where we can take ourselves anywhere in time or space, exceptionally written, cheers David

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/21/2023 6:53:00 AM

Thank you David for your kind words!! Happy Monday!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/19/2023 2:12:00 PM

Love where your mind goes…perhaps I can catch up!

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/5/2023 4:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Kim xxoo

Silent One

Date: 8/16/2023 9:16:00 AM

such a sad opening.. that one has to asleep to not feel pain... your poems always touch the reader... hope you are well my friend... in every pain there is a message...

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/17/2023 3:51:00 AM

Silent One, thank you so much!! So happy to see you here!!!! I hope you are well!

Deb M

Date: 8/16/2023 5:10:00 AM

Wonderful poem Mike and l can relate…l find sleep a beautiful escape and you never know where your dreams will take you! When l have a day time nap l call it my meditation time haha!! Debx

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/17/2023 3:51:00 AM

I totally agree Dab!! Thank you so much xxoo

Bill Baker

Date: 8/15/2023 11:11:00 AM

Your sleeping is dreamy, Mike. I liked it, especially the last line, my friend. Have a pleasant Tuesday! Bill

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/17/2023 3:50:00 AM

Thank so you much Bill!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/15/2023 10:14:00 AM

I am dreading dreams or shall I say nightmares? Great poem.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/17/2023 3:50:00 AM

Thank you Visitor!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2023 3:03:00 PM

i love this one. All my pain ceases when I sleep AND i make up cool stories for my dreams.

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/14/2023 4:11:00 AM

Thank you Andrea xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/12/2023 6:13:00 AM

Well written Mike. You have described this well. I understand the way this can be. Happy Saturday :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/12/2023 10:00:00 AM

Happy Saturday, thank you Heidi xxoo

Tom Woody

Date: 8/12/2023 6:02:00 AM

Reality vs. Dreamland. My dreams are usually bad so I prefer reality I guess. But I can understand the draw for some. Anyway, this was nicely written Mike

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/12/2023 10:00:00 AM

Thank you Tom!