Asleep

When I’m asleep, I’m not in pain
                    A respite from the constant rain
A place that seems so far away
                    From any darkened, dreary day 

When I’m asleep, my dreams are free
                             I’m anything I want to be
I’m anywhere I used to know
        There’s nothing that a dream can’t show

And everyone that I’ve held dear
                  That from this life, no longer here
Is with me still, their smiles to keep
                       Forever mine when I’m asleep

Yet sleep, though lovely in its course
                      With all it’s comfort to endorse
Cannot alone bring back the sun
                     While on this planet still we run

We must stay in a forward flow
                 While living still with time to grow
And loving what there is to love
                 And thanking what there is above

When I’m asleep, I hope I’ll find
                   Not only from the peace of mind
Of knowing what there was to know
                But dreaming of where next I’ll go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Chircop Avatar
September 8, 2023 at 2:32 PM
I can feel a tinge of sadness,of loss of someone once held dear,I can feel the longing,the vision of the future,and the re-union ..I can feel the beauty of dreams,thw escape to the land of Oz,where everything is wonderful,everything is beautiful,and all of those we love and hold so dear,are near..Dreams-my favourite moments.A beautiful poem.
Gentile Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 8:31 AM
Thank you Charmaine, you sensed exactly what I was feeling as I was writing this!! Happy Sunday xxoo
Wolf Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:04 PM
Dream, believe, then conceive! ~ Sperm Producer. (Hey, Mike: Know any good 'Egg Producers' I can hook up with?!)
Gentile Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 5:34 AM
If I did, the eggs ha e all been laid!! Thanks GW!!!
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August 20, 2023 at 3:37 AM
Nothing better than a dream, that one does not want to wake from Mike, they really are another form of reality where we can take ourselves anywhere in time or space, exceptionally written, cheers David
Gentile Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:53 AM
Thank you David for your kind words!! Happy Monday!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 2:12 PM
Love where your mind goes…perhaps I can catch up!
Gentile Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 4:37 AM
Thank you so much Kim xxoo
One Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 9:16 AM
such a sad opening.. that one has to asleep to not feel pain... your poems always touch the reader... hope you are well my friend... in every pain there is a message...
Gentile Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 3:51 AM
Silent One, thank you so much!! So happy to see you here!!!! I hope you are well!
M  Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:10 AM
Wonderful poem Mike and l can relate…l find sleep a beautiful escape and you never know where your dreams will take you! When l have a day time nap l call it my meditation time haha!! Debx
Gentile Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 3:51 AM
I totally agree Dab!! Thank you so much xxoo
Baker Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Your sleeping is dreamy, Mike. I liked it, especially the last line, my friend. Have a pleasant Tuesday! Bill
Gentile Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 3:50 AM
Thank so you much Bill!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 10:14 AM
I am dreading dreams or shall I say nightmares? Great poem.
Gentile Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 3:50 AM
Thank you Visitor!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 3:03 PM
i love this one. All my pain ceases when I sleep AND i make up cool stories for my dreams.
Gentile Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 4:11 AM
Thank you Andrea xxoo
Sands Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 6:13 AM
Well written Mike. You have described this well. I understand the way this can be. Happy Saturday :)
Gentile Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Happy Saturday, thank you Heidi xxoo
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