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clock
freezes
on ashes,
new bride…widow,
denied of  flowering seasons, untold.


7/13/2016
For Eve Roper

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2016 12:33:00 PM

Reads like winning material for the contest...Way to go..In the short lines it expresses sadness..Thanks for stopping by.Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 7/15/2016 1:58:00 PM

A sad theme expressed beautifully as you make great use of this form, Nette! I see that this is a top winner, so congratulations!! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2016 9:08:00 AM

wow, love the topic. This form works so well for it. Congrats, nette.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/14/2016 9:24:00 PM

A 7 for this moving, winning poem, Nette! Janice

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/14/2016 3:02:00 PM

I can always count on an exceptional poem from you Nette.....and here again, is the proof :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2016 2:44:00 PM

Lovely, Nette! Congratulations!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/14/2016 1:18:00 PM

Whoo - Hoo ! Congratulations on your Triple Tetractys contest, Nette, perfect form and wonderful poem. Hugs Eve

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/14/2016 4:03:00 AM

Amazing piece!! Congrats Nette, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/13/2016 10:20:00 PM

Well done my friend...enjoyed...glic...god bless...^WW^

DM Babbit

Date: 7/13/2016 1:58:00 PM

Beautifully sad. Good luck in the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/13/2016 10:50:00 AM

Poetic phantasmagoria!

Franco Gonza

Date: 7/13/2016 5:34:00 AM

Superior poem! An excellent job with the form, very solid. You've portrayed the pained emotions eloquently.

Constance La France

Date: 7/12/2016 5:16:00 PM

Nette, you always write a deep and wonderful poem and this no different and I am loving it 7 ~

Norma Arana

Date: 7/12/2016 4:12:00 PM

This reaches out to me; I like the raw , dark images found in your well chosen words. One of your finest!

Donna Jones

Date: 7/12/2016 3:37:00 PM

beautiful nett

Ashes On a Clock

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