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Ashes On a Clock

...
clock
freezes
on ashes,
new bride…widow,
denied of  flowering seasons, untold.


7/13/2016
For Eve Roper

deathlost lovetimetetractys

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Sara Kendrick

July 16, 2016 at 12:33 PM

Reads like winning material for the contest...Way to go..In the short lines it expresses sadness..Thanks for stopping by.Sara

Paul Callus

July 15, 2016 at 1:58 PM

A sad theme expressed beautifully as you make great use of this form, Nette! I see that this is a top winner, so congratulations!! Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

July 15, 2016 at 9:08 AM

wow, love the topic. This form works so well for it. Congrats, nette.

Janice Canerdy

July 14, 2016 at 9:24 PM

A 7 for this moving, winning poem, Nette! Janice

Carrie Richards

July 14, 2016 at 3:02 PM

I can always count on an exceptional poem from you Nette.....and here again, is the proof :)

Kim Rodrigues

July 14, 2016 at 2:44 PM

Lovely, Nette! Congratulations!

Eve Roper

July 14, 2016 at 1:18 PM

Whoo - Hoo ! Congratulations on your Triple Tetractys contest, Nette, perfect form and wonderful poem. Hugs Eve

Teddy Kimathi

July 14, 2016 at 4:03 AM

Amazing piece!! Congrats Nette, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)

Winged Warrior

July 13, 2016 at 10:20 PM

Well done my friend...enjoyed...glic...god bless...^WW^

DM Babbit

July 13, 2016 at 1:58 PM

Beautifully sad. Good luck in the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis

July 13, 2016 at 10:50 AM

Poetic phantasmagoria!

Franco Gonza

July 13, 2016 at 5:34 AM

Superior poem! An excellent job with the form, very solid. You've portrayed the pained emotions eloquently.

Constance La France

July 12, 2016 at 5:16 PM

Nette, you always write a deep and wonderful poem and this no different and I am loving it 7 ~

Norma Arana

July 12, 2016 at 4:12 PM

This reaches out to me; I like the raw , dark images found in your well chosen words. One of your finest!

Donna Jones

July 12, 2016 at 3:37 PM

beautiful nett

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