Ashes and Flowers of White

The ocean softly laps the boat
as I watch the setting sun.
I drop the flowers and watch them float,
relieved this day is done.

Ashes are scattered in the sea
followed by flowers of white.
I watch an eagle soaring free,
flying into the night.

Tears slip silently from my eyes
as the waves gently lap the boat.
I turn back home in darkening skies
while the flowers and ashes float.

Alone, I head the boat to shore.
My heart, bereft, forevermore.



04/07/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Gauthier Avatar
January 25, 2021 at 6:11 PM
O Francine, this one tugs at my heart. So lovely to find it published in the 2020 PS Anthology. A FAVE for me ~
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
March 2, 2014 at 9:45 AM
Wonderful sonnet. Congrats on the feature.
Crisci Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations, Francine for having your beautiful Sonnet featured this week. Your poem is filled with sadness...while you scatter ashes and flowers in that sea; your words express the loss of someone you loved so dearly. White flowers are a symbol of loyalty...so much sorrow you feel in remembering a lost love.Thank you for sharing it with us. Best wishes and hugs, Andrew.
A   Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 9:31 PM
Francine, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD
Oyewole Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 2:01 PM
Congrats Mistress on your win
Oyewole Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 2:02 PM
Though.. it's a mourn tone.
Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 8:51 PM
Congratulation. A WOW well deserved. Terry xoxo
Sister Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Oh I felt this. Loved every second., I want more. J
Johnson Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 5:57 PM
So very sad. I have never cast a loved one's ashes. I wonder if I could. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Gasun Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 12:30 PM
Beautifully sad poem which made me so emotional . I love this so much and I say, excellent write my dear Francine! Thank you so much for sharing and my big warm congratulations on your well-deserved grand win! love and hugs, Leonora
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:44 AM
many congratulations on your double win Francine, first as a fave and now this xx
Mannan Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 10:11 PM
Many many congrats for this wonderful win Francine
Williams Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 3:06 PM
Francine congrats on your win...David
Richards Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 2:27 PM
This is so beautiful, Francine........(I place it higher!) :)
A   Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Francine, thank you for the nice and beautiful poem, many blessings with your wonderful win~ PD
Eastman Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 11:25 AM
So sad! My husband's father was also scattered on the waves... I hope mine are mixed into the earth of a promising flower bed where the minerals left may possibly nuture some thing beautiful to follow.
Singleton Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 10:15 PM
Oh my so so sad, such a beautiful write Francine you had me right beside you on the boat giving you big hugs xx
Richards Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 7:47 AM
It is like watchng the scene unfold. So sad and tender!! Such a heartfelt poem. Congratulations, Francine!
A   Avatar
July 8, 2012 at 6:18 PM
francine, congratulations with your wonderful win -xox~pd
Nair Avatar
July 7, 2012 at 1:02 AM
A poignant one with vivid imagery..congrats on the win, ! Jag
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 10:35 PM
francine, this one is AWESOME. a big fave on this one from me. I just love this kind of poetry. Congrats.
Johnson Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 8:51 PM
Very sad but nicely done. Congratulations on your win Francine. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 11:46 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Francine. Love, Carol
Rozario Avatar
July 6, 2012 at 10:05 AM
Very nice sonnet Francine...congrats on your win.
Grisetti Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 11:00 AM
Wonderfully moving sonnet. The words and lines just flow like the sea.
Palmer Avatar
July 5, 2012 at 10:03 AM
you saw his spirit fly away,but you know he will be watching ,every day,great write Francine
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