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Ashes

Already your letter crumbles
S’s and f’s and remnants of 
Harpooned words
Eaten greedily by the goblin of
Squandered adoration


3/29/11

Received 1st place in "A Choice of Form" contest"

Copyright © Black Eyed Susan | Year Posted 2011

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Jack Horne Date: 8/2/2013 12:17:00 AM so glad to see this powerful acrostic was a big winner, Susan. Thanks very much - enjoyed the contest. Hope you are feeling A1 again by now : ) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/20/2012 10:02:00 PM Hola, Susan~ how are you, stopping by to read your first poem .. ooo I see it's an oldy featured poem. Good one, love the image of the goblin gobbling and taking advantage words of weapon that fall like ash,,, enjoyed your poem. My newest Favorit-tine poet... always~ pd Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/29/2012 10:09:00 AM Like this, belated congrats, like to see poets first posted. harry Login to Reply

The Situation Date: 12/22/2011 7:35:00 PM at last, someone who takes form and waste it not. T.S. Login to Reply

Mohammad Yamin Date: 8/8/2011 8:44:00 PM Congratulations, Susan, on your excellent poem winning the first round. Wish you good luck in the finals. -Mohammad Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 8/5/2011 3:56:00 PM I love this, Susan! Congratulations on "Ashes" making it to the First Rounds of PS's Intl. Contest! Awesome! Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/3/2011 10:25:00 PM Congrats Susan on this poem making it to first round competition in PS contest..g.l.luv.. Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/2/2011 6:11:00 PM Huzzah! moving forward congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/2/2011 9:54:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Susan. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 8/2/2011 8:56:00 AM Susan, Congratulations on your poem's capture of the first round. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/3/2011 11:30:00 AM oh my, sheer delight susan... my fondest congrats on your top win with my huggs! :) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/1/2011 10:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "A Choice Of Form" contest Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 7/1/2011 8:35:00 AM Brilliant Acrostic, Susan. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE WIN, Lainie Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 7/1/2011 7:19:00 AM Wow...I love this one....so creative, and pensive is this, and quite unique! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/1/2011 4:15:00 AM Congrats Susan on your first place win ..awesome luv.. Login to Reply

Anne Rutherford Date: 6/24/2011 3:52:00 PM Excellent words here Susan , I see you won with this ,kudos . Anne Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/31/2011 8:08:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/7/2011 8:12:00 PM Susan,, Congratulations on your featured poem this week... Wishing you a wonderful mothers day.. :-) p.d. Login to Reply

Karen Dominick Date: 5/4/2011 8:55:00 AM Amazing words! Loved it! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/2/2011 8:13:00 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Susan. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/2/2011 5:51:00 AM Congrats Susan on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a great piece to share with us all my friend with luv.. Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 5/2/2011 5:28:00 AM Very imaginative poem. Well done! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/1/2011 1:07:00 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, susan Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 5/1/2011 9:55:00 AM Congratulations on having your beautiful poem featured this week~~ Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/8/2011 11:27:00 AM I am stopping by today to thank you so much for your kind comments and to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry Susan. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of inspiration. Love, Carol Login to Reply

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