Ashes

She was found face down beside her bed
dead long before they kicked in the door
of the deteriorating house that reeked
of cat piss that had soaked into the
rotting planks of the bare wood floor
the plaster ceilings falling in
surrounded by mounds of detritus 
boxes of odds and ends that had
been bestowed upon her by those 
she had in their last days cared for
Every eye dry at the memorial service
not a single tear shed 
for the mother who had decades ago
been abandoned to raise three children on her own
and had died alone 
Under the full moon in the backyard of his home 
he had been so proud to be able to buy 
only a few months before 
she’d planned to visit that same day 
where she would now be a permanent guest
we transferred the ashes 
mixed with the powder of pulverized bone 
from the simple wooden box
into the ceramic urn I had helped him to choose
decorated with wine colored roses
fearful I was witnessing my own future

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Date: 5/10/2022 1:15:00 AM
Very emotive, nicely penned. My Dad was also found face down alone, he'd been there a while before the police kicked down the door. The sad thing is he turned his back on four children. He could have had so much more. Have a lovely day. H6H
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Date: 4/21/2022 4:41:00 AM
Wow…vivid imagery and sadness. You’ve told this well, Angela <3
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