Ashened

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"There is a fountain inside of you, don't go around with an empty bucket." Rumi Ashened white rocky hills rise Covered with pines and oaks Autumn's entrance has colored them They wear orange and gold cloaks Upon the precipice above Looking over the scene A feeling of awe overpowers From this view I have seen God in His handiwork gives gifts We can fill our empty souls It doesn't cost any money Just vision to behold

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Hilo Poet

Date: 11/9/2023 3:30:00 PM

A rather intriguing Other that you have beautifully crafted, Sara. I appreciate your precipice point of view, my friend. Cheers for the smile. Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/10/2023 6:57:00 AM

Why, thank you, William. I appreciate the visit and the uplifting review of my work. Sara K

Jude Herrick

Date: 11/2/2023 8:01:00 AM

Paired nicely with my morning coffee. I can smell the Autumn smoke and see out my window, that Auburn cloak.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/2/2023 2:21:00 PM

Thank you, Jude. I am glad you read it with a nice warm cup of coffee. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 10/23/2023 7:59:00 PM

God paints the sky with colors and decorates the earth with magesterial scenes. We don't have to give anything to view them. It is absilutely free of cost ! Lovely descriptions, dear Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/24/2023 2:08:00 PM

Glad you agree about God being the master painter, Valsa. I see we share some beliefs. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/11/2023 8:00:00 PM

Awe and trembling at the sight of such majesty. Beautiful poem-pic combo, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/12/2023 4:01:00 AM

Why, thank you, Gershon. I appreciate the high praise. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/10/2023 7:21:00 AM

The vision of picturesque nature and the philosophical richness that you've displayed here are truly magnificent dear Sara! I truly love that quote by Rumi and so beautifully you've elaborated on this.. Your imagery and wordplay.. Oh so breathtaking.. True, we are a gorgeous fountain of life, only if we let ourselves soar in the fascinating breeze of self-discovery and freedom..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/10/2023 7:26:00 AM

Hiya, why thank you for the review of high praise. I appreciate the visit and taking time to comment. Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 10/9/2023 3:48:00 AM

Some find it hard to grasp light when its sunlight and and when all is warm, but whatever we may have infront always good to remind others and ourselves to allow and appreciate it. I love the imagery here and use of colors and flow of this poem: as well as that quote you’ve used here too is brilliant! Absolutely stunning and very deeply meaningful. Pleasure reading you always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/9/2023 6:55:00 AM

Why, thank you, IE. I appreciate the high review of my work. Sara K