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Ashen Horizon

Written: December 09, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Tom Woody ****************** My fingers are stone— numb knuckles carved by the night’s chisel Feet drag as anchors through drifts of powdered glass The compass of my breath falters, And silence gnaws at the marrow of my resolve. I have always worshiped the wild Scaled ridges where condors carve crescents in the sky, wandered valleys where rivers rehearse their rhapsodies. They warned me: "not alone, not in winter." But I have always been a misfit pilgrim, a shadow that strays from the procession. Above me, the moon is a lantern of bone, It's a halo crown of cold fire I can hear as the air is so silent the quiet of galaxies swirling, the tiny hum of everlasting despair hangs through me similar to a worn-out cloak, I wish to shut my eyes to break down into the lull. Yet— In the argent glow, a vision unfurls. Not a face, but a flame-shaped silhouette, weeping rivers of light, calling my name with a voice that trembles the frost. It is her. My wife, my tether, my echo. A surge rises— not mine, but borrowed from some celestial reservoir. Words ignite in my skull: "Rise. Rise." And the mountain, once a labyrinth, unfurls a path as a silver ribbon. I stumble forward, hearing voices braided with wind. “Is that you? We were sent to find you.” Before the dark folds me under, I whisper, “Who sent you?” And the answer drifts, soft as snow, bright as salvation: "Your Guardian-angel."
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Kendrick Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 4:42 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tom's contest. Way to go. Sara K
Kauffman Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 12:12 PM
Lasaad, you have crafted a picture of metaphoric despair in crisp winter images that carve out a clear picture that stabs to the heart. What a beautiful, uplifting ending with its sense that no matter the winter night where we wander, there is a guardian always with us! Congratulations on your win! Blessings of warm joy, dear friend!
Guptar Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations, dear poet on your win in this contest with a lovely poem, littered with beautiful imagery. I particularly appreciated the second stanza, which is so well written. The concluding stanza is superb, sending quivers down the ribs. Wishing you the blessings of light and sending you sunshine from my country.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 5:43 PM
I'm with Paige....this poem left me breathless....spectacular write.
Hind Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 6:07 PM
Breathless, I am breathless. Beautiful.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 12:24 PM
Feet drag as anchors through drifts of powdered glass…sounds painful! … They warned me: "not alone, not in winter." But I have always been a misfit pilgrim..the moon is a lantern of bone…this one is terrific! Fave!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 12:04 PM
WOW!!! Your "Ashen Horizon" is a wonderful write/story. I love this one.  I did Not see your great ending coming. Oh yes, "Your Guardian-angel." ~ "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away..........
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