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Ash of War

A distant wood grows its gossamer,

   A near vale,

   wetted and forgotten

   cries alone,

   where rains fall forever ----

Where once babes lay down

   in the cool of grasses green,

   and a brook,

   where once rippled 

   an elven tune of old;

Now silent as the seasons here,

   where once stood great Love,

   on a throne of gold,

   midst the broken palisades and halls ----

   a near vale (now)

   wetted and forgotten,

Only the breeze of sad memory....

   the weeded roads and rubble ----

   whisper form their ashes,

" Let us rebuild what war has claimed "
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 6:44 PM
A truly great write that sends one on a mental search into another realm! Insightfully epic in its purity.. I wish someday to compose free verse at this level! Bravo on this fine, fine offering..
Montalbo Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 11:06 PM
its a hard build but together we can conquer all as a united we fall united we will rise.... great write... all my love on this one.... Gina
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 24, 2014 at 7:19 AM
Yes we can rebuild, we have no choice... Glad you enjoyed Gina!
Bordner Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 1:57 PM
War is very much analogous to prescribed fire. I admire the sensitivity and imagery of this poem Keith. J.AB.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 6, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Greatly appreciated Justin, especially coming from you! I'll be visiting your poems from time to time, glad you enjoyed bro :-)
Vaso Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 10:24 PM
A great write!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Many thanks arthur!
Showalter Swift Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 1:41 PM
LOve all the memories it evokes both real and imagined in this reader...like it captures all of the hauntings of all of the places...love best the image of babes in green grass long gone
Mills-Kelly Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 12:02 PM
Very Beautiful Kieth !! :)
Chircop Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Let us rebuild what war has claimed-Such a profound message keith..You transmitted the feeling of sadness mingling with reality so well.
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