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Ash In Her Words

She's choking on blood clots over the moon her mind has gone wondering and it won't be back soon. She's talking to angels under the sea her windy expression is causing a breeze. She's purple mixtures of all that's not good, her shape isn't changing i don't think that it could. She walks with the devil and flies with the birds. Her mouth is an ashtray and she's ashing her words.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/7/2011 7:09:00 AM
Thanks everyone. i appreciate the awesome comments. I have tons of poetry that i have written over the years. i'll keep posting them here and i'd love you to keep being honest about what you think! I love writing!
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Date: 6/4/2011 8:36:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry.. enjoy the site as u share words with luv..
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Date: 6/4/2011 3:45:00 PM
... LOVE THIS POEM!! FLUFFY
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Date: 6/4/2011 2:13:00 PM
Nice charaCTER sketch you have drawn "she", Chili
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Date: 6/4/2011 1:12:00 PM
really cool poem chilli i know someone like this Luv*Skat
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