Sabina Nicole Poet Verse

Ash Contest

The past is ash,
Indicator of all that’s dead,
The past is ash,
No longer prone to toxic lash,
Milk and honey now lies ahead,
A bed of roses where she’ll wed,
The past is ash.



By: Sabina Nicole
Contest: ALPHABETS OF RONDELET
Word: Ash
Written: 2-14-12

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Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2012 at 4:19 PM Nicely done, Sabina. One of my favorites! Congrats.

Samual Ronthorpe February 20, 2012 at 2:40 PM Sabina Nicole, wonderful write. Congrats on making the winners list in Nette's contest...................S.Ronthorpe

Carol Sunshine Brown February 20, 2012 at 12:17 PM Congratulations on your placement in ~Nette's~ "Alphabets Of Rondelet" contest Sabina. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson February 20, 2012 at 11:36 AM Great work. A dark past and rosy future. You kept it all in perspective. Congratulations. Love, joyce

Kash Poet February 20, 2012 at 10:50 AM Congrats Sabina on yourwin in Nette's contest.Enjoyed the read.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 20, 2012 at 9:57 AM congrats Sabina on a sweet success for this captivating entry luv..

Nette Onclaud February 20, 2012 at 5:01 AM i like the phrasing here, sabina... good content as well.. should have rated higher except for a minor typo... cool! congrats on your win in my contest! :) huggs Sabina Nicole February 20, 2012 at 6:05 AM thanks hun, may I ask what the typo is, I sometimes miss those:(

Debbie Guzzi February 14, 2012 at 7:08 PM very telling and true! Light & Love