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The past is ash, Indicator of all that’s dead, The past is ash, No longer prone to toxic lash, Milk and honey now lies ahead, A bed of roses where she’ll wed, The past is ash. By: Sabina Nicole Contest: ALPHABETS OF RONDELET Word: Ash Written: 2-14-12

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/20/2012 4:19:00 PM
Nicely done, Sabina. One of my favorites! Congrats.
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Date: 2/20/2012 2:40:00 PM
Sabina Nicole, wonderful write. Congrats on making the winners list in Nette's contest...................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/20/2012 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Nette's~ "Alphabets Of Rondelet" contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2012 11:36:00 AM
Great work. A dark past and rosy future. You kept it all in perspective. Congratulations. Love, joyce
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Date: 2/20/2012 10:50:00 AM
Congrats Sabina on yourwin in Nette's contest.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 2/20/2012 9:57:00 AM
congrats Sabina on a sweet success for this captivating entry luv..
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Date: 2/20/2012 5:01:00 AM
i like the phrasing here, sabina... good content as well.. should have rated higher except for a minor typo... cool! congrats on your win in my contest! :) huggs
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Date: 2/20/2012 6:05:00 AM
thanks hun, may I ask what the typo is, I sometimes miss those:(
Date: 2/14/2012 7:08:00 PM
very telling and true! Light & Love
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