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ASD She lives in a world shared by a few, An eager and precocious girl, Thought she would cough, but then, she knew, She lives in a world shared by a few, Applied physics, she mouths, and laughs, phew! Asked and we played, hop-scotch and twirl, She lives in a world shared by a few, An eager and precocious girl. 2019 August 29 *3rd Place* Silence ~~Silent One

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Silent One

Date: 9/5/2019 3:25:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in the contest..

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/5/2019 3:52:00 PM

Thanks--up for another challenge, I anticipate...

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/1/2019 4:01:00 AM

"She lives in a world shared by a few," Nice one...

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/1/2019 4:05:00 AM

My many thanks Arturo, ~ Aloha always William

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/29/2019 8:13:00 PM

I love triolets, penned a few long ago...nice penning my friend...just enough to let the reader see her, but short enough to have a mysterious feel to it... enjoyed :) hugs

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/29/2019 11:16:00 PM

I was inspired after your read to do one on autism--my heartfelt thanks ~ Aloha William

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2019 7:45:00 PM

Such a light touch, William, for this special personage. Loved it! :) gw

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/29/2019 11:14:00 PM

Thanks, GW my friend, again arduous climb ~ Aloha William