William Kelii Kekaula Poet Triolet

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She lives in a world shared by a few,
An eager and precocious girl,
Thought she would cough, but then, she knew,
She lives in a world shared by a few,
Applied physics, she mouths, and laughs, phew!
Asked and we played, hop-scotch and twirl,
She lives in a world shared by a few,
An eager and precocious girl.

2019 August 29

*3rd Place*

Silence
~~Silent One

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Silent One September 5, 2019 at 3:25 PM Congrats on your placement in the contest.. William Kelii Kekaula September 5, 2019 at 3:52 PM Thanks--up for another challenge, I anticipate...

Arturo Michael September 1, 2019 at 4:01 AM "She lives in a world shared by a few," Nice one... William Kelii Kekaula September 1, 2019 at 4:05 AM My many thanks Arturo, ~ Aloha always William

Sandra Adams August 29, 2019 at 8:13 PM I love triolets, penned a few long ago...nice penning my friend...just enough to let the reader see her, but short enough to have a mysterious feel to it... enjoyed :) hugs William Kelii Kekaula August 29, 2019 at 11:16 PM I was inspired after your read to do one on autism--my heartfelt thanks ~ Aloha William

Gershon Wolf August 29, 2019 at 7:45 PM Such a light touch, William, for this special personage. Loved it! :) gw William Kelii Kekaula August 29, 2019 at 11:14 PM Thanks, GW my friend, again arduous climb ~ Aloha William