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Ascension

The light soaks the soul
Taken beyond physical 
Earth, sky become one.

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Skat A

Date: 6/13/2015 7:17:00 PM

wow.. stunning

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 4/5/2010 9:12:00 AM

Beautiful!

John Beam

Date: 3/14/2010 2:19:00 PM

great hiaku thanks for comment and dude i like it better than sir

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/3/2009 6:30:00 AM

This is beautiful, Lance. Congratulations! Best Wishes, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/2/2009 9:28:00 PM

congrat.on your placing with this wonderful Haiku--Charma

Anonymous Norman

Date: 11/29/2009 1:52:00 AM

Thank you all for your kind words, it is a shame that what i consider to be one of my least challenging poems receives so much attention, but hey, i'm still grateful for the love sent my way and it will be returned tenfold. pea's and love

Marty Owens

Date: 11/28/2009 6:43:00 PM

Very nice Haiku...love it...Marty P.S. if it's in the contest...good luck...

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:42:00 AM

Congratulations Lance, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/26/2009 11:13:00 AM

Very nice! Congratulations on placing with this piece. This really sounds like a genuine haiku.