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Ascension

The light soaks the soul
Taken beyond physical 
Earth, sky become one.

Copyright © Anonymous Norman | Year Posted 2009

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June 13, 2015 at 7:17 PM

wow.. stunning

April 5, 2010 at 9:12 AM

Beautiful!

March 14, 2010 at 2:19 PM

great hiaku thanks for comment and dude i like it better than sir

Carolyn Devonshire

December 3, 2009 at 6:30 AM

This is beautiful, Lance. Congratulations! Best Wishes, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

December 2, 2009 at 9:28 PM

congrat.on your placing with this wonderful Haiku--Charma

Anonymous Norman

November 29, 2009 at 1:52 AM

Thank you all for your kind words, it is a shame that what i consider to be one of my least challenging poems receives so much attention, but hey, i'm still grateful for the love sent my way and it will be returned tenfold. pea's and love

November 28, 2009 at 6:43 PM

Very nice Haiku...love it...Marty P.S. if it's in the contest...good luck...

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

November 27, 2009 at 11:42 AM

Congratulations Lance, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brandee Augustus

November 26, 2009 at 11:13 AM

Very nice! Congratulations on placing with this piece. This really sounds like a genuine haiku.

Doris Culverhouse

November 25, 2009 at 6:50 PM

good write, enjoyed today!!

November 25, 2009 at 10:16 AM

Excellent Haiku Lance, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James

November 24, 2009 at 11:57 PM

Congrats on your success Lance Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today

November 24, 2009 at 2:56 PM

What an uplifting view. Made me smile. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest. Enjoy your honor! Keep on writing. Karen

November 24, 2009 at 6:53 AM

Wonderful, uplifting haiku, Lance! Congratulations on your win! Also, thank you for your sweet comments. Hugs, Donna

November 24, 2009 at 3:52 AM

BEAUTIFUL HAIKU, LANCE. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST. LOVE, LAINIE

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 24, 2009 at 3:33 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Lance. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 23, 2009 at 9:56 PM

Congrats, Lance, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved winning haiku... blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

November 23, 2009 at 9:35 PM

Lance, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

Carrie Richards

November 20, 2009 at 5:57 PM

A lovely, inspiring haiku. Good luck in the contest! ~ Carrie

November 20, 2009 at 4:54 PM

Beautiful Haiku, Hope you're entering it in Raul's contest! Thanks for sharing. Have a great Thanksgiving with yours! Love Light Patty

November 20, 2009 at 4:34 PM

Interesting Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

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