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Ascending Deciduously

Me and me be a baobab tree,
yes siree
I and I have very long longevity ...
no ma’am,
this bark speak no rot falsity

A thousand years seems like
only a day to this coniferous body
Got a blessed budding life personality

This ancient root soul
seek to ascend always deciduously
upward ... ever branch bravely

Many rings of joy and sorrow candidly
have savannah clouds strengthen
an inner resolve to grow tall fear free
A boundless courage namely

Plain truth breathing 
is the only long life way to be

My and my baobab destiny
has an unlimited joyous canopy
Plenty bright posterity leaf and leaf,
so future sun beaming happy

Always deciduously ascending 
Ever upward eternally

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 11/10/2019 5:45:00 AM
You are truly a fascinating creative writer. Thanks Freddie Panagiota
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Date: 11/9/2019 11:19:00 AM
Hi Freddie, did you mean Personally or Personality? Somehow Personality would fit the flow better. This poem flutters before my mind’s eye. I really like the feel of it.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/9/2019 11:41:00 AM
Ty for the keen eye, Richard. You're the best, pal. Love and joy forever.
Date: 11/9/2019 11:02:00 AM
WoW! Freddie, You pen is original and one of a kind. The "soup" is so much better with you in it. How you did this blew me away. Good rhythm and flow and content. I won't view a tree the same way, that due to your remarkable talent. Have wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/9/2019 10:50:00 AM
Only way is up.... Well written my friend
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Date: 11/9/2019 9:12:00 AM
I enjoyed this positive, beautiful poem Freddie! So nice :)
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