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Ascending Deciduously

Me and me be a baobab tree, yes siree I and I have very long longevity ... no ma’am, this bark speak no rot falsity A thousand years seems like only a day to this coniferous body Got a blessed budding life personality This ancient root soul seek to ascend always deciduously Upward, upward ... ever branch bravely Many rings of joy and sorrow candidly have savannah clouds strengthen an inner resolve to grow tall fear free A boundless courage namely Plain truth breathing is the only long life way to be My and my baobab destiny has an unlimited joyous canopy Plenty bright posterity leaf and leaf, so future sun beaming happy Always deciduously ascending upward Ever upward eternally

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Date: 11/10/2019 5:45:00 AM
You are truly a fascinating creative writer. Thanks Freddie Panagiota
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Date: 11/9/2019 11:19:00 AM
Hi Freddie, did you mean Personally or Personality? Somehow Personality would fit the flow better. This poem flutters before my mind’s eye. I really like the feel of it.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 11/9/2019 11:41:00 AM
Ty for the keen eye, Richard. You're the best, pal. Love and joy forever.
Date: 11/9/2019 11:02:00 AM
WoW! Freddie, You pen is original and one of a kind. The "soup" is so much better with you in it. How you did this blew me away. Good rhythm and flow and content. I won't view a tree the same way, that due to your remarkable talent. Have wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/9/2019 10:50:00 AM
Only way is up.... Well written my friend
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Date: 11/9/2019 9:12:00 AM
I enjoyed this positive, beautiful poem Freddie! So nice :)
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