Asabi

My eyes are weak But it wouldn’t close Only when it beholds you Oh! Of special birth “ASABI” Are you heading to the stream? If so I can help to lift the water pot Upon your head My eyes are weak But it wouldn’t close Only when it beholds you Oh! Of special birth “ASABI” Are you heading to the farm? If so I can take the cutlass And you take the hoe My eyes are weak But it wouldn’t close Only when it beholds you Oh! Of special birth “ASABI” Are you heading to the market? If so I can take the yam And you take the bush meat

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Date: 3/10/2016 10:08:00 AM

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