As We Wait

Rain
        Comes from
      The gray skies
   Melting more snow
    One day at a time
      Winter retreats
         As we wait
            To see
            Spring

Heidi Sands

4/14/19

rainseasonssnowninette

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Anisha Dutta

April 24, 2019 at 11:28 PM

Always pleasant to greet Spring. I agree.

Heidi Sands

April 25, 2019 at 8:49 AM

Thank you Anisha :)

Caren Krutsinger

April 20, 2019 at 1:21 AM

You are waiting, and it will be 79 degrees here in KC today. Sorry about that, but so glad for me. Rain often brings spring for sure.

Heidi Sands

April 20, 2019 at 10:40 AM

Yes, the rain and warmer temperatures today are melting more of the snow still here. 79 degrees where you are sounds very nice. Thank you Caren :)

Gershon Wolf

April 17, 2019 at 10:28 AM

I like that image conveyed by your phrase, 'Winter retreats.' That's usually how it works, kind of like a man's hairline recedes. (---although not mine, as I am forever in the Springtime of my years. LOL.) Nicely done, Heidi. ~ Gershon

Heidi Sands

April 17, 2019 at 10:34 AM

Lol...thank you for your visit and kind comments, as well as a smile you have brought me .Have a great day :)