As We Wait

Rain Comes from The gray skies Melting more snow One day at a time Winter retreats As we wait To see Spring Heidi Sands 4/14/19

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/24/2019 11:28:00 PM

Always pleasant to greet Spring. I agree.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/25/2019 8:49:00 AM

Thank you Anisha :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 4/20/2019 10:15:00 AM

Lovely as always. The wait is over, Heidi. It is spring!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/20/2019 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Sandy. Still waiting here. The rain is still getting rid of more snow today :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/20/2019 1:21:00 AM

You are waiting, and it will be 79 degrees here in KC today. Sorry about that, but so glad for me. Rain often brings spring for sure.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/20/2019 10:40:00 AM

Yes, the rain and warmer temperatures today are melting more of the snow still here. 79 degrees where you are sounds very nice. Thank you Caren :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/17/2019 10:28:00 AM

I like that image conveyed by your phrase, 'Winter retreats.' That's usually how it works, kind of like a man's hairline recedes. (---although not mine, as I am forever in the Springtime of my years. LOL.) Nicely done, Heidi. ~ Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/17/2019 10:34:00 AM

Lol...thank you for your visit and kind comments, as well as a smile you have brought me .Have a great day :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/16/2019 5:17:00 PM

some things are worth waiting for, heidi...an engaging piece... spring beckons! huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/16/2019 5:26:00 PM

True Nette. We are still in winter here. Thank you for your comment :)

Douglas Pederson

Date: 4/16/2019 11:52:00 AM

we can't hurry nature or it will turn on us. patience is a virtue. I'll stay in tune for the flowers!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/16/2019 12:09:00 PM

Yes, patience is a virtue. I look forward to writing about flowers. Thank you for your comment :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/15/2019 8:08:00 PM

Love that winter is retreating here; and it should. Well penned and it fits this form.

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/16/2019 7:28:00 AM

Thank you M.L. :) Have a nice day.

Joseph May

Date: 4/14/2019 8:58:00 PM

Winter still holding strong?... Hope spring comes soon..

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/15/2019 7:51:00 AM

Yes, it has been holding on. More rain again today to wash away some more. I hope Spring arrives soon too :)

Constance La France

Date: 4/14/2019 3:08:00 PM

Heidi, nice ninette, it is the same here, slowly the snow is melting, it is raining today and that will help wash away more of that dirty snow ~

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/14/2019 3:24:00 PM

Thank you! I appreciate your visit and comment. I hope that your snow is washed away soon and it will be spring :)