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As We Pray In Unity

Clouds become the sky to see
Gray and white swirling above me
Thoughts change with things externally
In a world gripped by uncertainty
Where are the answers that seem to flee?
In a time we all need them desperately
I walk in familiar calmness to be
Ready for anything beyond each tree
In a nightmare it's hard to be happy
Dealing with deaths increasing daily
Others before us, lived horrific similarity
Maybe, we thought we'd always be free
But now, we wish for life, a simple bumblebee
To visit the yard and buzz around in glee
Something, anything, pieces of beauty
Heal us now, as we pray in unity!


Heidi Sands

3/26/20

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2020

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Robertina B. Date: 4/26/2020 5:48:00 PM So heartfelt and moving, Heidi.. You penned a inspirational write, my friend.. Really touched me ! Your talent shines! Stay safe and well.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 4/26/2020 6:17:00 PM Thank you so much Robertina! I hope you are well :)

Sandra L. Weiss Date: 3/28/2020 7:08:00 PM So much of who you are is in the Ines of your verse. I would not have thought of a monrhyme, you did it beautifully. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/28/2020 7:36:00 PM Thank you Sandy . I am grateful for all your support and friendship. Stay safe :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 3/28/2020 11:41:00 AM A moving poem that expresses the agony we face each day dearest, Heidi. May your prayers and mine and those of our friends be heard so we get rid of this unseen enemy. Beautifully written. Hugs xxx and blessings. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/28/2020 7:35:00 PM Thank you so much Demetrios. May our prayers be answered in these difficult times. Stay safe :)

Silent One Date: 3/28/2020 9:44:00 AM It is difficult times and a time for us to reflect and hopefully become more United. There are many lessons to be learnt from this... Great poem Login to Reply Silent One Date: 3/28/2020 2:21:00 PM Awww that is so sweet you remember. Take care Heidi Sands Date: 3/28/2020 10:43:00 AM Yes, very difficult times. We are all up against this, and it is a good time to reflect and unite. I appreciate your visit and comment. I remember, when I first came to Soup. You were one of the 1st ones to compliment me on my poem. I will never forget. Thank you Silent One. I hope all is well. Take care :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/27/2020 8:07:00 AM You speak for us with this lovely poem Heidi: But now, we wish for life, a simple bumblebee To visit the yard and buzz around in glee Something, anything, pieces of beauty Heal us now, as we pray in unity!... I felt the soothing tone and emotions of your verses. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/27/2020 1:40:00 PM Hi Vijay. I appreciate your kind feedback. I am wishing to see one. For some reason, the usual animals are not around here lately. I hope this finds you well. Take care :)

Jenish Somadas Date: 3/27/2020 1:22:00 AM But now, we wish for life, a simple bumblebee.. I like the line..Yes, it is the desire in ever feable heart..Nice poem..Stay safe.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/27/2020 1:38:00 PM Thank you Jenish. I hope you are well. Take care. Have a nice day :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/26/2020 11:11:00 PM Uncertain times for us all Heidi, hope you're well, stay safe. Tom Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/27/2020 1:37:00 PM Yes , that s for sure Tom. I hope you are well and safe too. Thank you :)

Gershon Wolf Date: 3/26/2020 7:38:00 PM A simple bumblebee - sign of the times, I guess. Cheers, Gershon Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 3/27/2020 1:36:00 PM Yes and I didn't see one, I was thinking about one. I am actually concerned about the lack of usual animals around here. Squirrels, chipmunks, birds, etc. Although, my neighbor warned of a beer and 3 Cubs here the other day. Thank you. I hope you are well Gershon :)