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As We Metamorphose

Being mistook, we fed the fire— not just the book, but index too. We toasted doubt on tongues of lyre, then let the ashes write what’s true. Being mistook, we knelt to clocks and worshipped time like temple glass. The hours cracked—we laughed like rocks— immortal fools who let life pass. Being mistook, we drank the rules from chipped old mugs marked “DO” and “DON’T.” The tea was bitter, brewed by ghouls— we sipped, then said: perhaps we won’t. Being mistook, we wrote in clouds— words shape-shifted, twisted, flew. We caught the wind, defied the crowds, and found a sky we never knew. Being mistook, we danced on glass, each step a crack, a spark, a thrill. We didn’t mind that shards might pass— we learned to dance beyond the still. Being mistook, we built a bridge from silence, salt, and sudden light. We walked it sideways, past the ridge, to somewhere else, but just as bright. Being mistook, we lost our keys inside a pocket full of holes. We laughed until the locks gave breeze— and found the door was just our souls. Being mistook, we dropped our masks, like stones into a silent lake. We heard the ripples—questions, asks— and learned to give instead of take. Being mistook, we dropped the script, and let the wildness flood the view. We danced on edges, tightly gripped, embracing all we thought untrue. In chaos found, a flame that slipped— a poem shaped by me and you.

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Date: 5/26/2025 6:43:00 AM
Hi Aaliyah, I enjoyed this poem very much, I think I use write similar to this, not sure If many could see what I was trying to share....but I'm glad you shared this with me. After Covid and the world forgot how to laugh, I do not write seriously much any more, but so much appreciate that you do. I have so many favorite lines that you have written in this work, truly inspiring. Thank You
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Aaliyah O'Neil
Date: 5/29/2025 6:22:00 AM
Hi, thank you so much for your heartfelt message. It means a lot to me that my poem resonated with you. I completely understand what you’re saying—sometimes it’s hard to share what’s in our hearts, especially after everything we’ve been through. I’m grateful to be able to write seriously and to connect with others like you who appreciate it. Your encouragement truly inspires me. Thank you again for your kind words.

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