James Fraser Poet Rhyme

As We Lay On Our Bed

On our virgin white bed
We lie and talk
Caress and kiss
Pleasurable thoughts
 
Of joy and love
Passioned pure
Erogenous zones
Wanting, sure
 
Positional bliss
Scented scenes
Alfresco joins
Picturesque themes
 
The look in our eyes
At the words we said
The look of love
As we lay on our bed


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Ashe Kristy De La Keur Scoville July 20, 2009 at 11:13 PM This is lovely dear Highlander thank you for your support

Sabrina Huggins July 20, 2009 at 11:55 AM This is great!! I can totally picture it. You have a great way with words. And thanks for the comment. I'm still figuring out how i reply back.lol....Sabrina

Sherry Kadmani July 17, 2009 at 7:26 AM Ohhh god! i just LOVE this poem! lots of love...Sherry

Carolyn Devonshire July 15, 2009 at 8:52 PM You capture a lady's heart with your beautiful words, James. Love you! Carolyn

Charlene Bird July 15, 2009 at 8:40 PM Beautiful and light with the words of wanting pasison. Great work again my friend!

Christopher Higgins July 15, 2009 at 4:21 PM Simply soft and gentle..a winner my friend..words that would make any women come alive...well done.

Sara Kendrick July 15, 2009 at 4:06 PM Really nice Rhyme, James. Love is the key. Sara

Charmaine Chircop July 15, 2009 at 2:48 PM i love the mixed emotions-joy and love passioned pure--cos what is passion and joy without love,its just a lusty moment,but sprinkled with love,its a lifetime in scented Heaven--you're so inspired to write passion James-you write it so well--wonderful write--charma