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As We Lay On Our Bed

On our virgin white bed We lie and talk Caress and kiss Pleasurable thoughts Of joy and love Passioned pure Erogenous zones Wanting, sure Positional bliss Scented scenes Alfresco joins Picturesque themes The look in our eyes At the words we said The look of love As we lay on our bed http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love4.php

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Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 7/20/2009 11:13:00 PM

This is lovely dear Highlander thank you for your support

Sabrina Huggins

Date: 7/20/2009 11:55:00 AM

This is great!! I can totally picture it. You have a great way with words. And thanks for the comment. I'm still figuring out how i reply back.lol....Sabrina

Sherry Kadmani

Date: 7/17/2009 7:26:00 AM

Ohhh god! i just LOVE this poem! lots of love...Sherry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/15/2009 8:52:00 PM

You capture a lady's heart with your beautiful words, James. Love you! Carolyn

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/15/2009 8:40:00 PM

Beautiful and light with the words of wanting pasison. Great work again my friend!

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/15/2009 4:21:00 PM

Simply soft and gentle..a winner my friend..words that would make any women come alive...well done.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/15/2009 4:06:00 PM

Really nice Rhyme, James. Love is the key. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/15/2009 2:48:00 PM

i love the mixed emotions-joy and love passioned pure--cos what is passion and joy without love,its just a lusty moment,but sprinkled with love,its a lifetime in scented Heaven--you're so inspired to write passion James-you write it so well--wonderful write--charma