As We Fly Away Together

Your language of love never heard before
Cuddles eager heart whispering romance
Awakening feelings residing in my dreams
Chasing in solitude your enchanting spirit,

Your shine sparkles, alien to my universe
As you arrive to greet me defying barriers
Seducing me discreetly to feeling of wonder
Making me surrender to splendor of ardor,

Your kiss on my lips blooms cosmic flowers
Capturing my soul with fragrance of desire
Arousing my senses to beg for your touch
Setting me aflame with your sensuous fire,

Embroidered by your supernatural fingers
Fabric of fervor caresses me to want more
As we seek eternity embracing each other
Enamored by reverence of ambrosial love,

Soon you declare your visit is ephemeral
Lifting me up with your mysterious signal
Spiraling me gently into sphere of your bliss
As we fly away together to a magical world.

March 29, 2018
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George Avatar
April 15, 2022 at 5:19 AM
"Your kiss on my lips blooms cosmic flowers, Capturing my soul with fragrance of desire, Arousing my senses to beg for your touch, Setting me aflame with your sensuous fire."...... Matchless in sensual beauty and romantic fervor....
Raven Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 2:03 PM
Hi Vijay, i do agree with Harry, you do take us on a wonderful journey with your words. I love the content, the strong images and the gentle words from your heart as they flow down the page. Your words sing in the language of romance my friend. This is an excellent write. Have a wonderful Saturday. Your friend always....Mike.
Horsman Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 3:33 PM
Wow you take one on a wonderful journey.
Pandit Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Thank you harry.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:52 PM
fantastical fantasy poem, Vijay. You can spin such pretty lines of imagey in a poem like this.
Pandit Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Thank you Andrea--appreciate your feedback.
Murray Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 4:40 PM
The language of love and sensuality. I am enamored with this poem Vijay.
Pandit Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 5:10 PM
Thank you Jean..always happy to read your comments.
Onclaud Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 2:07 PM
you sing with this fantastic poem way beyond our earthly world, vijay...as always, extraordinary!..huggs
Pandit Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 5:09 PM
Thank you nette...appreciate your kind feedback.
Kannan Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Wow.... Beautiful imagery...Well done... Good luck in the contest...
Pandit Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Thank you Supraja.
Ashley Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 3:57 PM
Your impassioned poetic lines are lovely and sensuous, Vijay. Beautiful imagery, as always.. Best wishes or a win!
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Many thanks Susan..appreciate your kind words.
Sands Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:45 AM
What a beautiful poem for the contest Vijay. I enjoyed it! Very well done :)
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:56 AM
Appreciate your kind feedback..many thanks Heidi.
One Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Reads like a winner to me Vijay.. Third stanza is very sensual..
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Silent One..appreciate your kind feedback.
Williams Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:21 AM
A lovely romantic and sensual write Vijay. Good luck in the contest....Maria
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Maria..appreciate your kind words.
Malik Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 7:13 AM
Love <3
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Yazmin..appreciate your comments.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Your poem an Olympian's ambrosia of love my friend, Vijay! Good luck my friend. A fav!
Pandit Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 8:43 AM
Happy to read your kind words..many thanks my friend, Demetrios.
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