Unseeking Seeker Poet Sonnet

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As We Be Breathed

The air we breathe is us being so breathed
Gods life force within, that never wavers
An innate vibrancy, leaving soul pleased
Hark hearts love murmur, in gentle whisper 

Surrendered to soft divine entwined kiss 
As love in love with love, slowly draws nigh
We gasp in wonderment, suffused in bliss
Our childlike presence, let’s out a long sigh

Each desire, that we utter, as prayer
Marked by purity of loving intent
Unveils delusion, layer by layer
Revealing our core, self-luminescent 

Shaped upon the anvil by our free will
Elixir divine, all voids within fills

29-April-2021

Writing Prompt - Breathe - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Constance La France May 11, 2021 at 5:10 PM Seeker, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully poem, nice pic, well done, peace _Constance Unseeking Seeker May 11, 2021 at 7:58 PM Thanks for hosting these thought provoking contests, Constance!

Anitha Jayasankar May 10, 2021 at 9:16 AM A very beautiful sonnet using those six words Unseeking Seeker....I specially loved the third stanza... Congrats on your win... God bless.. ~ Ani Unseeking Seeker May 10, 2021 at 9:41 AM Thank you, Anitha!

Juliet Ligon May 3, 2021 at 9:30 AM Beautiful sonnet! So profound to consider "God's life force within." Unseeking Seeker May 3, 2021 at 10:03 AM Thanks, Juliet!

Regina Mcintosh April 29, 2021 at 9:22 AM Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina Unseeking Seeker April 29, 2021 at 7:03 PM Thank you for your visit, Regina! God bless

Victor Buhagiar April 29, 2021 at 6:28 AM This is a beautiful sonnet. Kudos for using the desired words in perfect harmony with the poem. Best for a win. Unseeking Seeker April 29, 2021 at 8:14 AM Thank you for your constant encouragement, Victor!