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The air we breathe is us being so breathed Gods life force within, that never wavers An innate vibrancy, leaving soul pleased Hark hearts love murmur, in gentle whisper Surrendered to soft divine entwined kiss As love in love with love, slowly draws nigh We gasp in wonderment, suffused in bliss Our childlike presence, let’s out a long sigh Each desire, that we utter, as prayer Marked by purity of loving intent Unveils delusion, layer by layer Revealing our core, self-luminescent Shaped upon the anvil by our free will Elixir divine, all voids within fills 29-April-2021 Writing Prompt - Breathe - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 5/11/2021 5:10:00 PM
Seeker, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Breathe - Challenge with your wonderfully poem, nice pic, well done, peace _Constance
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Date: 5/11/2021 7:58:00 PM
Thanks for hosting these thought provoking contests, Constance!
Date: 5/10/2021 9:16:00 AM
A very beautiful sonnet using those six words Unseeking Seeker....I specially loved the third stanza... Congrats on your win... God bless.. ~ Ani
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Date: 5/10/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thank you, Anitha!
Date: 5/3/2021 9:30:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet! So profound to consider "God's life force within."
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Date: 5/3/2021 10:03:00 AM
Thanks, Juliet!
Date: 4/29/2021 9:22:00 AM
Lovely write. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Date: 4/29/2021 7:03:00 PM
Thank you for your visit, Regina! God bless
Date: 4/29/2021 6:28:00 AM
This is a beautiful sonnet. Kudos for using the desired words in perfect harmony with the poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/29/2021 8:14:00 AM
Thank you for your constant encouragement, Victor!

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