As We Age

Leaves Aging Fluttering Across the ground November is here End of season As we age Looking Back Heidi Sands 11/3/19

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

John Hamilton

Date: 11/14/2019 10:56:00 AM

Lovely writing Heidi, this time of year does bring a lot of introspection, longing for the days of youth etc. So much said in so few words, so is the beauty of this form, and your words, a wonderful match!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/14/2019 1:16:00 PM

Thank you for the positive feedback on this one John. I am happy to hear that :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/4/2019 4:29:00 PM

this was perfect my friend. What a great poem you have written here. I am impressed.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2019 6:12:00 PM

Oh thank you Chris! I appreciate your kind comments on my poems :)