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As Time Goes By

Picnics, plays, and days of plenty Wanton ways and I but twenty Laughing, carefree, and forward bound While time passed by without a sound For years I'd lie and search the sky Or sit idly by and wonder why But now I pray beneath the sun And long for days of twenty-one

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Date: 2/29/2024 9:28:00 AM
Dear Randy, such an exceptional poem! I appreciate the finesse of your wistful poetic expression. You've captured the way I feel, and the passage of time in one's life perfectly. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes, dear poet.. ~Susan
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Randy Freie
Date: 2/29/2024 12:10:00 PM
Hi Susan, doesn't it go by in a flash? I just turned 62 a few months ago, but it seems like yesterday that I was this pimply-faced kid joining the Navy right out of highschool. Frankly, I'd settle for being 41 again. Thanks so much for your supportive comments.
Date: 2/24/2024 5:32:00 PM
Perfect penning, Randy. Love your style. Thanks, Gershon
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Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 5:42:00 PM
Thank you Gershon, I really appreciate your feedback. Take care.

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