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I woke up to a sunrise scintillating With glowing low fluffy clouds barely moving. Verdant dewy hills and vales adorn the view. A light refreshing breeze that was so soothing. In her pretty cottage she prepared her food. Sometimes looking out of the window, waiting. Wishing I'd return and hug her lovingly, Remembering those lips intoxicating. Sluggishly time went by, she’d ne’er gave up hope. Spending time, her sad songs playing all along I knew I had to make her my own, my love. She knew I would come, for to me she belonged. 11 syllables per line

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Date: 3/4/2022 4:16:00 AM
So romantic. There is much beauty in this waiting when both are sure of the possible union and of spending exciting time together !
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Date: 12/1/2021 1:30:00 PM
Very romantic lines you have penned in this one. I don't know how I missed it but somehow, I did. Thanks for the time you spent reading my poems. Sara
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Date: 4/6/2021 7:45:00 AM
The love and longing evoked in these lines are romantically vivid. The video and picture are wonderful, too. Blessings, Evelyn
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Date: 2/16/2021 1:25:00 PM
This is lovely Victor. Very sweet and soft and romantric. Loved it. Perfect for Valentines Day. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/12/2021 1:20:00 PM
what a lovely romantic write Victor you are a great storyteller:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/12/2021 6:42:00 AM
Hi Victor, I enjoyed this write from start to finish. Especially the happy ending:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/11/2021 10:46:00 PM
Great imagery, waiting sometimes hard to cope
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Date: 2/11/2021 7:29:00 PM
enjoyed poem and that great song. Worried for a second but felt good that it worked out in the end. Thank you I needed that!!
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Date: 2/11/2021 3:53:00 PM
I love the vision of her at the window. Romantic!
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Date: 2/11/2021 1:31:00 PM
It must be wonderful to love someone this intensely, Victor. Your descriptions in the first verse are very creative and beautiful. But I did enjoy the story behind the poem too! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2021 12:29:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Victor, love will always find it’s home however long it’s takes ~~ Belle
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Date: 2/11/2021 6:00:00 AM
Life is sweet when in arms of love. Lovely poem, Victor.
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Date: 2/11/2021 5:46:00 AM
A wonderful romantic write full of feelings and hope. Enjoyed reading. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/11/2021 4:02:00 AM
Lovely romantic verse that ends on a happy note. Tom
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Date: 2/11/2021 2:37:00 AM
True love waits patiently, nice poem, Victor:)
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Date: 2/11/2021 2:00:00 AM
- When love is real and true ... beautifully written, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2021 1:53:00 AM
Lovely poem, Victor. Warm and whispering hope... lovely. God bless you always with love and prayers, Gina
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