As They Fall

basking in spring with robin songs
verdant leaves in gorgeous green 
splendour swings in silken sarongs
summer retreats in change of scene.

among fleeting clouds flowers fade
fluttering branches in crimson glow
orange and brown in luminous shade
latticework of leaves in ground below

Libra and Virgo in tints of autumn
fling their cloak to an eternal dwell
dry leaves lulled in quietude bottom
nothing stays the same, O farewell !

flock of geese migrate to unknown
a spade of leaves  in bonfire smoke 
embracing the air, no regret or moan.
As they fall, from a dream they awoke.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 10:37 AM
An enchanting write filled with imagery, alliteration, and personification - marvelous! Congratulations! :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 1:59 PM
Debjani, love the fall imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
Narain Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 10:02 AM
Excellent poem. Congrats on win.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations, Dear Debjani, on your win. You have portrayed a gorgeous picture of Fall with your brilliant word choices and stunning images. Love the Title!
Agustin Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 11:16 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me virtually behold Fall splendor since my country is devoid of Fall. God bless you.
Bowring Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:39 PM
This is a gorgeous, visually delightful changing of seasons poem Debjani. So well written, flows beautifully and great rhyming. ‘ verdant leaves in gorgeous green’/ orange and brown in luminous shade’ - you’ve captured the glory of nature so well. I loved it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.
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