Deb Wilson Poet Enclosed Rhyme

As the Night Dances

The winds of evening and circumstance
Blow into my soul with vision and light
Breathlessly lift my feet to the night
Surrender my soul to this wondrous dance

Locked in rhapsody,wrapped in your arms
Living the beat as we dip and twirl
Don't let go,I'm your rhumba girl
Feeling the sorcery of your charms

The moon grows fat,the sky turns bright
Morning beckons,dawn comes calling
In stillness we hear our footsteps falling
As we reluctantly end the night





**for contest"May I have This Dance?"
sponsored by Barbara Gorelick

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 6:04 AM Congratulations Deb, on your well deserved 1st place win for your poem in Barbara Gorelick's contest "May I Have This Dance". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta February 14, 2011 at 6:23 PM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Deb

Tahera Mannan February 13, 2011 at 8:00 PM The poem made me dance with you. Beautiful. Many congrats for this gem.

Deb Radke February 13, 2011 at 6:04 PM Oh, very, very good. Your poem truly dances. Excellent writing. Congratulations on your most deserved first place in the contest. Best wishes. Deb

Sara Kendrick February 13, 2011 at 2:12 PM Congratulations on your win with this very creative work..Sara

Francine Roberts February 13, 2011 at 12:37 PM loved this the first time I read it , knew it would do well, congrats on your first place win Deb

Debbie Guzzi February 13, 2011 at 10:49 AM loved the Rumba girl! It would also be a good title? Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Audrey Haick February 13, 2011 at 9:48 AM I missed this! Congratulations on your awesome Ist Place win, Deb. Enjoy the honor! Love, Annalise

Carrie Richards February 13, 2011 at 7:30 AM Congratulations Deb, on this wonderful winning poem....a lovely dance it is!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 13, 2011 at 6:28 AM Congrats Deb on your first place win in the Dance contest with this elegant entry my friend.. super win .. enjoy with luv..

Andrea Dietrich February 12, 2011 at 10:00 PM wow, I read so many of these entries and missed out on the number one ,UNTIL NOW> Congratulations, this is really beautiful, Deb! Luv, Andrea

Robert Pettit February 12, 2011 at 9:35 PM Deb, I congratulate you on winning the top spot in Barbara's contest. I knew since I first read this it would perform well.

Barbara Gorelick February 12, 2011 at 8:57 PM I loved this one..congrats on a first place in my contest. Please soup mail your address for your prize...BG

Robert Pettit February 9, 2011 at 6:40 PM Superb writing. Barbara should like this entry.

Francine Roberts February 7, 2011 at 8:51 AM lovely poem, best of luck in the contest Deb

Tahera Mannan February 7, 2011 at 6:29 AM Oh Deb I can so picture it. beautiful. All the best for the contest.

Nette Onclaud February 7, 2011 at 4:34 AM you make me feel like dancing under the moolight, deb.. and i love to dance!! enthrallling and uber-romantic!! go for the win..:) huggs, nette