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As the Night Dances

The winds of evening and circumstance Blow into my soul with vision and light Breathlessly lift my feet to the night Surrender my soul to this wondrous dance Locked in rhapsody,wrapped in your arms Living the beat as we dip and twirl Don't let go,I'm your rhumba girl Feeling the sorcery of your charms The moon grows fat,the sky turns bright Morning beckons,dawn comes calling In stillness we hear our footsteps falling As we reluctantly end the night **for contest"May I have This Dance?" sponsored by Barbara Gorelick

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Date: 2/24/2011 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations Deb, on your well deserved 1st place win for your poem in Barbara Gorelick's contest "May I Have This Dance". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Deb
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Date: 2/13/2011 8:00:00 PM
The poem made me dance with you. Beautiful. Many congrats for this gem.
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Date: 2/13/2011 6:04:00 PM
Oh, very, very good. Your poem truly dances. Excellent writing. Congratulations on your most deserved first place in the contest. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this very creative work..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2011 12:37:00 PM
loved this the first time I read it , knew it would do well, congrats on your first place win Deb
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Date: 2/13/2011 10:49:00 AM
loved the Rumba girl! It would also be a good title? Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2011 9:48:00 AM
I missed this! Congratulations on your awesome Ist Place win, Deb. Enjoy the honor! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/13/2011 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations Deb, on this wonderful winning poem....a lovely dance it is!
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Date: 2/13/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your first place win in the Dance contest with this elegant entry my friend.. super win .. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 2/12/2011 10:00:00 PM
wow, I read so many of these entries and missed out on the number one ,UNTIL NOW> Congratulations, this is really beautiful, Deb! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/12/2011 9:35:00 PM
Deb, I congratulate you on winning the top spot in Barbara's contest. I knew since I first read this it would perform well.
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Date: 2/12/2011 8:57:00 PM
I loved this one..congrats on a first place in my contest. Please soup mail your address for your prize...BG
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Date: 2/9/2011 6:40:00 PM
Superb writing. Barbara should like this entry.
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Date: 2/7/2011 8:51:00 AM
lovely poem, best of luck in the contest Deb
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Date: 2/7/2011 6:29:00 AM
Oh Deb I can so picture it. beautiful. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 2/7/2011 4:34:00 AM
you make me feel like dancing under the moolight, deb.. and i love to dance!! enthrallling and uber-romantic!! go for the win..:) huggs, nette
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