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As the Moon Sets

As the Moon Sets                         

in a quiet place you have found me, sighing
a tranquil morning of pastel that sees you blushing
I sit serene in your healing feminine fellowship
letting the gift of this moment reverberate within

link my spirit to your divine senescence cadence
as the goddess of rebirth swirls amid interlaced tales
no sacrifice laid but flowers sweetest perfume
infuse my instincts with your imbued woman wisdom

your silver tendrils enfold the sent suspended wishes
delivered on wings in prayers of innocent pleas to thee
found weeping against the night’s ebony emptiness
you bless their broken promises with gifts of hope

as you fade from my respite of morning’s vision
erased in the glow of sunrises drowning drumbeat
heaven still waltzes in your arms amid stars opulence
as does the kiss of dew upon delicate lips of roses

10-3-2020
Brians Your Choice 20 contest
1st place

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Date: 4/27/2021 5:40:00 AM
This is quite simply -- sublime!! In my humble opinion, for what it may be worth...one of your very best poems I have yet read. Truly wonderful writing! My very best regards, Jeanne. :) john
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 4/27/2021 5:58:00 AM
Hi John...again, thank you for your uplifting comments. I am so happy that I have pleased your heart with my simple words. Jeanne
Date: 1/10/2021 7:46:00 AM
I have wanted to thank you for the comment you made on my poem Taking One's Leave and to let you know I have enjoyed your works too. Unfortunately I was locked out till recently.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 1/18/2021 3:42:00 PM
Hi Carrick. Isn't this just the best place to read poetry and have others read and comment on yours? It has expanded my world in a wonderful way. Glad you are not locked out any more. Jeanne
Date: 10/4/2020 1:48:00 AM
' heaven still waltzes in your arms' so beautiful. Congratulations on your win. X
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/4/2020 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Joanna. :D
Date: 10/3/2020 1:36:00 PM
- A wonderful poem, Jeanne ... love how you end it - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 10/3/2020 4:40:00 PM
I so look forward to the full moons...and those months when she sets over the bay as the sun rises...I used to have a rose the same colors.

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