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As the Light Fades

White doves flutter, dying words whisper Silence becomes haunting as Angels sing A lone filtered light with its soft glister Cast a shadow aloft from a dove's wing This arrow of light pierces the dusk gray To my knees, I fall and pray for you love Touch the small casket where your body lay And seek questions unanswered from above I found no comfort in your final breath Forgive me, as I drink this bitter wine Release me from a vow before your death As lost love chokes me with its shadowed twine This poison turns lips into darker shades And brings a silent dark as the light fades 4/18/16

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Date: 9/13/2016 9:40:00 AM
Congrats!!! on your win Federic...very well deserevd and enjoyed...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/12/2016 11:39:00 AM
Frederic, the more I read of yours the more I appreciate your gift...very beautifully written :) congratulations on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo
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Frederic Parker
Date: 9/13/2016 4:51:00 PM
Thank you for your kindness Laura, all a poet can hope for is that someone reads and enjoys their poetry
Date: 7/18/2016 10:55:00 AM
Sad and gorgeous. Incredible write.
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Date: 7/17/2016 8:03:00 AM
Beautifully written and classic in form - I love a good sonnet! Congrats on your 7th place win in the Your Best contest! Jesse
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Date: 7/16/2016 8:29:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic, a wonderful win. Thank you for the support. Skat
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Date: 7/16/2016 7:28:00 PM
a beautiful sonnet Frederic I have so much to learn from you about writing this form - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/16/2016 6:27:00 PM
Such a emotional sonnet, and a heart wrenching picture you have put in the mind's eye. Well done, Frederic !!!
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Date: 4/20/2016 9:03:00 PM
Really beautiful write Frederic.
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