Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

As the Day Turns

Blushing cheeks of horizon--
A kiss of golden sun,
Periwinkle on magenta--
Caress of amethyst dawn.

Floating random motion
Are hazy white clouds,
Humid air combustion
Aroused by the oceans
Is birthing new storm,

As albatrosses glide
On stone-color heights.

Nascent ashen canvas
Exuding accents gray--
Garb of celestial glumness
Harboring fleeting rain.

Behind misty rain drops
Rainbow colors lurk,
Spectrum that glitters--
Radiance of smart prisms.

Music that is heard
Is call of singing birds,
Winds can be seen
Where leaves flutter,

Soft twilight bending--
Art of mauve evening.

Onset of charcoal dark--
Day’s sullen goodbye,
Twinkles in the night--
Welcome starry smiles.

May 20, 2020
Placed 1st: Brian's Choice O Contest

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Valsa George January 9, 2022 at 8:34 PM With the descend of charcoal night, we are welcomed by starry smiles ! All through the poem, are scattered such lovely images. All which you write keep up a level above the average.

Lindsay Laurie May 29, 2020 at 8:37 PM G'day Vijay … the colours and sounds of nature makes a lovely verse Vijay - Lindsay Vijay Pandit May 30, 2020 at 6:36 AM Much appreciate Lindsay--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra May 27, 2020 at 2:17 PM Always love the way you blend beauty of nature with your soothing imagery Vijay. "Spectrum that glitters", "caress of amethyst dawn" love them. This is beautiful! :) Vijay Pandit May 27, 2020 at 3:05 PM Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks.

Charlie Smith May 23, 2020 at 12:29 PM Congratulations Vijay, colorfully described and well done... Vijay Pandit May 23, 2020 at 12:34 PM Thank you Charlie--much appreciate.

Judy Ball May 22, 2020 at 4:13 PM Beautiful Vijay. The end of the day and the signs of approaching storm. Nicely done. God Bless and stay well, JB Vijay Pandit May 22, 2020 at 5:45 PM Thanks Judy--much appreciate.

Jennifer Proxenos May 21, 2020 at 1:18 PM The vivid colors and rubies and sapphires give such an exotic exuberance to your poetry my dear friend, this one is no exception - caress of amethyst dawn - Wow Vijay - Bravo my friend! Blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit May 21, 2020 at 2:20 PM Much appreciate your visit and kind remarks, Jennifer--many thanks, my friend.

Brandy Nicole May 20, 2020 at 9:03 PM All I need to do is close my eyes and wrap your words gently around me. What a wonderful feeling indeed. You leave me in complete awe. I am gliding through the wind. It's peaceful. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit May 21, 2020 at 6:49 AM Always a pleasure to read your comments. So very kind of you my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Paul Callus May 20, 2020 at 6:02 PM You are the poet of imagery and color, Vijay. Probably you would also make an excellent painter!! A most enjoyable poem,,,as always. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit May 21, 2020 at 6:48 AM What a nice think to say, Paul! Much appreciate your valued comments. Many thanks.

Janice Canerdy May 20, 2020 at 2:45 PM Your descriptive poem is very lovely, Vijay--taking the reader from sunrise to sunset. Janice Vijay Pandit May 21, 2020 at 6:47 AM Thank you Janice--much appreciate the kind feedback.

Tom Cunningham May 20, 2020 at 7:35 AM You've covered the whole day beautifully Vijay So well composed. Tom Vijay Pandit May 21, 2020 at 6:46 AM So very kind of you Tom--much appreciate, as always--many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh May 20, 2020 at 6:59 AM I just love this. It's a beautiful poem and I wish you all the blessings from heaven and more. Love to you, dear friend. Gina Vijay Pandit May 21, 2020 at 6:46 AM Much appreciate Regina your kind remarks--many thanks.