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As the Day Ends

As the Day Ends Vivid sunset in motion painted waves on red ocean the dark is creeping near Birds stop their commotion Sandman spreads his sleep potion now silence is loud and clear When the day takes demotion time to give your devotion to those you hold most dear.

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Darren White

Date: 5/7/2017 12:52:00 AM

Lenna, I'd like to hear this with music, it really reads like a lyric, and I feel you heard music while writing this. It's absolutely gorgeous :)

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/7/2017 1:24:00 PM

ahhh, yes Darren, nature is full of music that we each hear/feel differently and sometimes just putting words to those feelings make it musical. So glad you enjoyed this and THANK YOU :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/5/2017 4:39:00 PM

what a beautiful end to the day - i like the flow to your lyrics Lenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/5/2017 6:39:00 PM

Thank You Jan :) I'm glad you like it, I appreciate your compliments and support and happy you came back again !Enjoy your evening !! :)

Lenna Walker

Date: 5/5/2017 12:34:00 PM

Chris, that is a so good to hear, I LOVE to make people smile. Coming from someone with so much more talent than I, your compliments on MY talent are a huge blessing... I cannot Thank you enough for your continued support :)

Chris Green
Date: 5/5/2017 1:44:00 PM

Pssst, I'm down there. :) Ok, now let's stop with the you are better than me stuff...ok? You are very talented and a lot of what you write inspires me.

Chris Green

Date: 5/5/2017 11:58:00 AM

Nice rhyming scheme and the flow, the melody of the poem was smooth and peaceful feeling, just as the end of the day you describe. You are a very talented poet my friend. You know how to make people smile with your words.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/5/2017 3:52:00 PM

pssst, I am down here where I belong this time......hehe, I think I replied to your first comment in the wrong space, oh well .... lol, as to your second comment ... I will try to stop saying your are better than me (I may still think it) and to be an inspiration is truly a treat. Thanks again my friend :)