As Strong As Sea

As Strong as sea





Standing resolute and naive to wild currents, as sea tests the strength.




Written March 29th, 2016
For contest " monoku # 10" by PD A
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Parmale Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:35 AM
Congrats Dr. I see you rock everywhere.. Awesome ...
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 9:22 AM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2016 at 3:33 PM
coming back to say CONGRATULATIONS
Selfa Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 8:02 AM
When you write Dr. Upma, I really feel your overflowing passion in writing! You inspire so many people with your works and I'm so lucky I'm one of them! Thank you so much! Congratulations! :) _HANS
Gazbowski Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 7:55 AM
Excellent one liner, loved its soft undertones.
Devnath  Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 4:04 PM
Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Thanks
Callus Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 7:29 AM
A trial of strength...the sea vis the lighthouse! Will nature be the eventual winner?! ~ congratulations on this fine win, Upma:) ~ Regards // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Yes nature always is n will be .. Thnx for ur kind words Paul ..
Quigley Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 6:21 AM
Interesting perspective. Congrats!
A. Sharma Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Thank you
Kimathi Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 2:34 AM
Greetings Dr. Upma. Congrats for your placement with this line!!! ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Thank you
A   Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 12:34 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Awesome Win. Stop by my blog "Invading," if you'd like. Drop a smile and tell me a little about your Monoku :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A. Sharma Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Linda.. Glad u liked..
La France Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 7:13 AM
Upma, great monoku for the contest, best of luck ~
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Thanks Broken..
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 1:06 AM
Beautiful! I haven't seen the picture, but it may be the mysterious lighthouse I saw from another poem. GL in the contest. ; )
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Thanks Connie..
May Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 12:11 AM
Nice monoku Dr Upma...best wishes
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:51 AM
Thanks Joseph..
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:31 PM
oh good, I have found one very close to my own take on this picture! I like it, Upma.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:51 AM
Thanks Andrea..
Chakrabarty Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Much enjoyed. Love.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:52 AM
thank you
Allison Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 11:17 AM
beautifully penned Dr Sharma good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
April 1, 2016 at 1:53 AM
Thank you Jan .. u r so sweet..appreciate ur visits..
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