Lycia Harding Poet Rhyme

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As Spring Is Felt

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Drops flung free of Winters' pelt,

pelt pale seedlings strung below

Below the soil, as spring is felt,

felt springs uncoil through melting snow

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Timothy Hicks March 27, 2016 at 1:27 AM Packs a punch in a just a few lines. Like your dramatic language like "flung" and "pelt" ... original seeing as spring is typically thought of as gentle and easy going ... congrats on you HM!

Vladislav Raven March 25, 2016 at 4:04 PM Hi Lycia, a beautiful song of Spring. Congratulations on your win in the contest. I give this write a seven and i put it in my faves....Vlad.

Constance La France July 22, 2015 at 8:12 AM Lycia, you have penned a very lovely Rhyme of spring waiting beneath the snow, visual, beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, glances . . Lycia Harding July 22, 2015 at 12:31 PM Thank you pretty BW! xoxo