Bree Darline Poet Pantoum

As She Waits

As She waits for hours on in for him to reply
She feels he doesn't like her..... in THAT way
She has lost hope of him ever caring for her
She cant bare it any longer...

She feels he doesn't like her..... in THAT way
But her feelings wont fade away
She cant bare it any longer... 
Maybe he is busy;she thinks to ease the pain and calm herself

But her feelings wont fade away
She has lost hope of him caring for her
Maybe he is busy;she thinks to ease the pain and calm herself
As she waits for hours on in for him to reply

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Sean L Sanders August 1, 2013 at 10:46 AM Congratulation on being featured. Excellent poetry poet.

April Gabriella July 28, 2013 at 11:06 PM I really wish I didn't know this feeling. :\ Really great write. You captured this feeling perfectly.

Skat A July 18, 2013 at 10:36 PM Bree, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT

Andrea Dietrich July 14, 2013 at 1:45 AM I really like reading this one. Congrats for your win again!

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2013 at 12:04 AM Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA

Skat A July 9, 2013 at 12:20 PM Bree, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A July 9, 2013 at 12:24 AM Hi Bree -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Brittany Martin July 8, 2013 at 10:54 AM Woah, is this poem about me? haha Just kiddin'. I can feel the character's doubt, hurt, and anxiety... literally. Thanks for the share! I hope to read more. :)

Edward Orozco July 8, 2013 at 9:11 AM Well written piece, I felt the sadness with the doubt mix as she waited for the reply... Sadly reality hits and we must walk forward... Well done! Welcome to the soup!! Hope to see more of your talent here!- Edward

Anne-Lise Andresen July 8, 2013 at 4:26 AM - Hello Bree - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)