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As Night Falls

As night falls, I think of you, All the things we used to do, Those days we spent together, We were made for each other, As night falls, I remember, Dewy dreams of December, You and me were meant to be, Truly bound yet fully free, As night falls, I lie awake, Thinking of that lovely ache, It stems from my love for you, That stays just as ever new. (7 syllables) 15.05.2020

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Date: 5/28/2020 10:23:00 AM
A beautiful write Jo, congrats I see you placed in the contest!
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:33:00 AM
The lovely and lonely ache of longing, so aptly worded in your love poem, Jo. A beautiful read. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes in the contest ~ John
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Date: 5/16/2020 9:10:00 AM
Yes, truly romantic and nostalgic of great love. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 5/15/2020 6:52:00 PM
“Truly bound yet fully free,“ the only way to love. This is beautiful Jo. xxoo
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Date: 5/15/2020 3:47:00 PM
A love that keeps the course extending past the end.
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Date: 5/15/2020 11:53:00 AM
I enjoyed the loving tone of your song, Jo--memories of true bond--forever love. A lovely write.
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Date: 5/15/2020 10:46:00 AM
Very nice Jo, yes the heart aches with a love lost, enjoyed!
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Date: 5/15/2020 9:58:00 AM
This is really beautiful Jo. The way you say "dewy dreams of December" arising both longing and tranquility. A melodious creation!
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