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For Daniel’s wake me up when September ends contest 08/23/2026

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As my memory rests DHR (with audio)

And when my body tires of me 
I lie beneath a chestnut tree, 
rolling among the broken burrs 
where solid sleep rarely occurs
Waking up is the toughest part
when I've never slept to start. 

I fear no place except the bed;
where pillows weigh upon my head
Memory foam gives no assistance;
insomnia thrives on resistance 
It waits til eyes are almost closed, 
never unconscious, then reloads

'Neath the tree is more appealing 
than tracing welts upon my ceiling; 
each one reflects a calloused lie,
the burrs tattooed on my naked eye
drilling dread into tomorrow night, 
a future where there's no respite

This bed has worn me to the bone, 
or have I worn its frame alone? 
No dreams arrive; the lucid stays, 
a consciousness that only strays 
far from the tree l'm primed to be-
or not to be, ‘mid autumn debris. 

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I’m tired of the chestnut tree’s shade ~
being gentler than the bed I’ve made
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Lane Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 12:34 AM
I’ll be throwin’ me hat in with the other ladies on the hearin’ of yer burr, David Kavanagh 😍 for now, ya truly have given voice to yer lines! A repeat customer you’ll be makin’ of the lot of us who fancy yer voice and yer poetry!! And ya even thanked us for listenin’ 😉
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 4, 2026 at 3:03 AM
Of course Lin, I’ll thank anyone that listens to me, or indeed reads my lines lol! this one probably needed a voice to gauge the tempo I imagined when writing, sending more burrs your way 😀, cheers David
Onpaper Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 1:22 PM
Gosh!!! Your voice …! The BASE !!! The RUSTICNESS! … the ACCENNNT! … sorry !! The moment heard you voice I didnot listen to a single word you read … I was simply soothed by your voice … I had to read the poem to actually focus 😄😅.., stunning read ..! And a wonderfully woven piece!
Onpaper Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 2:17 PM
Hehehe .. I have a way with making people speechless 😄.. it’s quite the talent I must say😂🤣😂… this pieces shows the heaviness of the emotions wonderfully… I very much enjoyed every bit !
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 2:04 PM
Ahem! Im speechless Miss Lioness! Thank you for stopping by with a great confidence boosting comment, I really had no time to practice the audio, so just went with the spontaneous, I really enjoyed writing this one, seemed to come quite naturally once I got the concept sorted, cheers David
Empress Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 1:21 PM
Dear David I listened to this twice ~ second time because first time I was lost in the cadence of the spoken word ~ 👏 incredible! I can hear the brilliant accent! You definitely should do more of these! Oh and btw congratulations on your win! This was a very impactful read! Well deserved Sending you light always ~ 💫
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 1:57 PM
Thank you Ink, I was delighted with the placement, so decided to try an audio for the hell of it, yeah there’s no disguising my accent, not that I would lol! I much appreciate your vote of confidence in this piece, cheers David
G  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 1:12 PM
Well I wasn't disappointed David - I'm delighted that you have graced Poetry Soup with another audio, I do indeed hope you make a habit of it! It wonderfully enhances the poem and I'll happily sign up if you get into narrating audio books (or indeed ingredients lists or phone books!) fantastic 🥰
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 1:52 PM
Aw shucks! I’m relieved you think my audio enhances the poem, I kind of settled into it after the first stanza, I had very little time to do a dry run today, ingredient lists or phone books sounds good lol! Cheers David
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations to you on your winning work in Daniel's contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 1:45 PM
Thanks Sara, I was delighted to have made the cut, hope you enjoy the audio I just added too, cheers David
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 4:23 PM
Fantastic poetry. Congrats on your win. This is so eloquent.
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 3:06 AM
High praise Andrea, I’m delighted this one was recognised on the placement list, thanks so much for stopping by with kind comments, cheers David
G  Avatar
September 2, 2026 at 2:57 PM
I'm thrilled to see your name amongst the winners list David for this beautiful example of your poetry. All your writes contain such depth and authentic voice (I wonder is it even possible to intensify that further??), it's impossible not to be moved. As much as I love the almost lullaby like cadence this one has, it hasn't forsaken the edginess. With a closing monoku that is just divine 😊 congratulations 🥳
G  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 4:12 AM
I can't wait 😍 your spoken words are the best 🥰
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 3, 2026 at 3:04 AM
Aw thanks Laurentine, I might just give that a go and try a voice over, I think if a poem doesn’t contain my edginess then it wouldn’t be written from my soul, I was delighted with the placement and the voice award from the judges, 😀 my little add on Monoku, just seemed to flow naturally from the poem, I’m so glad you think it worked, cheers again, David
Empress Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 7:33 AM
Pleasure reading you today’ Sending you light always I like how you always keep it so real! Keep sharing these poems! They would make so many feel less alone.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 8:41 AM
Heya Ink! I might save that line (Waking up is the toughest part when I've never slept to start) as my epitaph (or maybe a variation of it) 😀, I find it can be quite cathartic to write about life especially without any agenda or bias, most readers appreciate (keeping it real) even life’s absurdities need to be called out sometimes, thank you so much for your insightful comments, and fave, I’m truly honoured and delighted, cheers David
Empress Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 7:32 AM
Whoa dear David, I think many can resonate with this powerful and raw and honest poem that flows in such a captivating cadence, I love the flow of words, and how youv described insomnia, insomnia and lack of sleep could lead to so many other problems that can be so very hard, Iv seen loved ones suffer too. And I cant help but love the lines “ Waking up is the toughest part when I've never slept to start.” Wow! Thats so catchy! This is so very moving and profound! A fave for me! Best wishes!
Sharma  Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 3:30 AM
"Waking up is the toughest part when I've never slept to start. " Felt each and every line... I want to let you know that your writes really are something that speak to my soul and this quality, not many possess! Thank you for inspiring so many with with such resonating words, pleasure reading you always, sending you best wishes for the contest and this shud do very well ⭐❤️‍🩹🍂🍁 Soothing starbeams and fairylight all acrosssss! A FAVE ~ 💫💫 Keep writing and sharing!
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 5:05 AM
Hey there Hiya, I think most poets suffer insomnia from time to time, we are such deep thinkers after all, a blessing and a curse truth be told 😔, Still I’m delighted and humbled you rate this difficult write as excellent, I hope the sponsor enjoys it too, (Waking up is the toughest part when I've never slept to start) is one of my favourite lines, I also enjoyed embedding Shakespeare’s (to be or not to be) in the final stanza, as this is how I feel after sleepless night 🥱, thank you so much for uplifting comments, fave, and beautiful emojis, cheers David
Sharma  Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 3:27 AM
Sigh, i felt everything that you've conveyed here dear David.. and how ironic.. I've been experiencing something similar, with nightmares and insomniac self.. I know what you mean by that line "This bed has worn me to the bone, or have I worn its frame alone? " My goodness.. enough to make my heart quiver and bleed tears.. made me emotional a bit, thinking of past and everything can really transform into a monster that feeds on our sanity sometimes. And especially, memories! The way you've delivered everything is nothing less than brilliant
Poet Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 4:48 AM
My friend, David, your excellent poem beautifully captures the struggles of insomnia and the contrasting comfort found in nature. Your imagery is vivid and creates a strong emotional impact. Also, the way you depict the interplay between restlessness and the yearning for peace is both relatable and poignant. David, your ability to convey complex feelings with simplicity and depth is really impressive! Best wishes with the contest.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 10:54 AM
Hey there Lasaad, hope you’re keeping well, thanks you for your kind words on my poem, peace of mind is priceless in this world and so is a good night’s sleep, they both go hand in hand, to the extent I don’t believe we can have one without the other, it’s a vicious circle, most nights I do sleep well, but it’s not something I ever take for granted 🙃 I’m delighted you found my poem impressive and felt the complexity behind this one, cheers David
Smith  Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 8:45 PM
A haunting, finely controlled poem: the chestnut tree becomes a powerful counter-image to the oppressive bed, while the recurring sleep imagery captures insomnia’s cruel paradox with real force. The close’s echo of “the bed I’ve made” is especially affecting—resigned, self-aware, and beautifully bleak.
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 24, 2026 at 12:55 AM
Thanks Allison, it was quite difficult sustaining the chestnut tree as a counter image to my insomnia, I don’t think I could have kept it up for another stanza, so decided to wrap it all up into a closing monoku, I’m delighted you found the whole piece haunting, resigned, and beautifully bleak, cheers David
Godwin Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 2:12 PM
EXCELLENT writing, flow, rhyme, imagery downright exciting despite the serious subject matter. I embrace everything about your poem. (try not getting under the covers, just a throw blanket makes me feel like I'm camping and for some reason stills the head.) Never mind me, I just noticed this is for a contest, you may not need sleep advice. A winner for sure. CayCay
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 2:26 PM
Hey CayCay yes it’s for Daniel’s contest, I do get bouts of insomnia from time to time, I have a few tools in the box for dealing with it, but not always successfully, so this one came quite naturally to me, thanks for sharing your coping mechanism for those restless nights, and of course for embracing my poem, cheers David
G  Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 1:44 PM
Hey David! How is this a lullaby??? Maybe when we're insomnimaniacing we're gifting another a gentle nights sleep? Perhaps we shouldn't chop up trees to make our beds? As I've been out hugging trees today, my theory should play out as a restful nights sleep, or perhaps the trees we interact with place spores into our lungs and mine our consciousness? Hang on, I've gone astray here... I love the gentle cadence of this and can identify with the dread as the chance to sleep slips away... Faved 😊
Kavanagh  Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 2:14 PM
An insomniacs autumnal lullaby with a little Shakespeare to boot, It has got a certain cadence when read at a nice steady pace; what have those trees been feeding you today, whatever it is sounds pretty potent stuff, I like trees too, especially the chestnut type, and spent many a childhood day climbing then, shaking the branches knocking down the biggest Conkers, I’m not even sure if they’re still a thing in the school yard, health and safety and all that 🙃 thanks so much for jumping in and faving this one, I’m delighted! cheers David
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