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As My Forever Waits On Me

Streets glazed over in wintered frostings, traffic lights reflect glistening hues painting this sidewalk festive As I walk, my breath floats before me, not unlike a ghostly apparition, then disappearing waiting on the next Footsteps striding to the song in my head “You and me” that is our song… Chills converge, though not from cold, My rapidly beating heart sings and it stays with me, never ending in my mind, for I dream the lyrics are her words to me Changing lanes a slippery endeavor as I cross over the hidden yellow lines coated white beneath blurred tire tracks, ruts, like life used to be…before her, before winter became beautiful and opening my eyes each day a blessing Making my way to her door step, my pulse races between each fluttering snowflake, perhaps anticipation, perhaps nerves… rehearsing once more, practice makes perfect they say… as my forever waits on me Reaching in my pocket I remove the small box lifting the lid I smile at the sparkle, dispersing the rays of a November sun, shimmering in my eyes, now mesmerized by the wonder that is us… hoping she will say yes

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Date: 11/25/2016 5:58:00 PM
Oh sweet proposal..A Winter Proposal so it seems..I 'll be a flower girl or maid of honour if the need arises..Smile: ). ExtremeLy Romantic. A fave.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 6:04:00 PM
Thank you so very much my sweet friend. I will keep that in mind and let you know. :) I appreciate you Charmaine. Your kind words forever make me smile
Date: 11/25/2016 5:19:00 PM
Very well penned!!! Do inspiring and you have a great imagination! I adore every single word!!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so very much, I truly do appreciate your kind words on my poem today. I am grateful for your visit and thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/25/2016 5:08:00 PM
oh Chris the imagery is so beautiful from beginning to end - I had a huge lump in my throat at the end of the poem - oh sooooo romantic I LOVE it:-) into faves:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2016 3:52:00 PM
Your write the most beautiful romantic lines Chris - I am more of a humourist and very much admire those that hold that romantic pen:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 5:15:00 PM
Jan, your comment just brought the biggest smile to my face. Thank you so much, I can't even tell you how much your kind words have touched me today. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 11/25/2016 4:46:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Chris. I remember that feeling so well ... and the answer made my forever wait worthwhile. Love the lush language and the effervescence of this love happy poem. Excellent work as to be expected from you, my poetic friend. Love and joy.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 4:56:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend. Just penning form something floating around in my imagination but I can certainly imagine that feeling, the nervousness but the joy when that answer is yes.
Date: 11/25/2016 4:46:00 PM
This one is beautiful Chris! I was hanging on every word through this, in suspense. Excellent. If this is true to life, I hope it is yes you will soon be hearing.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/25/2016 4:55:00 PM
Thanks so much my sweet friend but.....this is just a bit of fictional poetry. I am thrilled though that it touched you like that. Thank you again for always being so kind to me.

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