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As Lovers Fall

I shall dream of you As the darkness comes Do not broken hearts Understand the numb What reason is this? A broken heart Calls out a name In lovers arms Be still the shame Twisted tales Come undone Forever Shedding Empty Tears Written for Catie's "Hex" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/16/2010 8:32:00 PM
"In lovers arms be still the shame . . ." This is a line which books are written about. Very moving.
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:17:00 AM
This is really heartfelt and moving, Michael :) wishing you all the best in the contest :)
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Date: 2/15/2010 12:19:00 AM
Congrats on your recent contest success Michael.Rgds Brian & best wishes with this one.
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Date: 2/12/2010 3:58:00 AM
Wow, beautiful writing Michael...Raul
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Date: 2/11/2010 11:19:00 PM
Touching and deep..beautiful..Charma:)
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Date: 2/11/2010 10:32:00 PM
Beauiful poem Michael. David
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