As Love Runs

He sang-‘You’re like a red, red rose
With you dear, my life ever glows’
She sang- ‘But you’re a thorn
Your presence, I greatly mourn’
Now both sang- ‘So we shall end our woes’
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Well, sad in one way and in another it is funny so a good poem. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 11:44 AM
Just 5 lines to tell a wonderful Limerick story/write. Have a blessed day.........................
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 8:47 PM
I like it that they decided to harmonize.
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 5:38 AM
They go together the rose and the thorns. Life would be boring otherwise. Your pen always shines, Valsa.
George Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 10:25 PM
Wise and mature observation ! Life cannot be all roses ! Thanks a lot Vijay!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:58 AM
Lovely limerick full of joy and love. ~~
George Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 10:24 PM
Glad you enjoyed it ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Jayasankar Avatar
November 30, 2021 at 2:47 AM
Ha...Loved your limerick dear Valsa...Am happy their sorrows, at last, will end as they both sing "so we shall end our woes".... enjoyed reading. Have a great blessed day. It feels good to read your beautiful poems in Soup. Hugs...~ Ani
George Avatar
December 1, 2021 at 10:23 PM
Thank you very much Ani. Yes, thus ended their woes... as both were longing for a separation in their heart of hearts !
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