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As Love Runs

He sang-‘You’re like a red, red rose With you dear, my life ever glows’ She sang- ‘But you’re a thorn Your presence, I greatly mourn’ Now both sang- ‘So we shall end our woes’

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/8/2023 8:07:00 AM
Well, sad in one way and in another it is funny so a good poem. Sara
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Date: 12/14/2021 11:44:00 AM
Just 5 lines to tell a wonderful Limerick story/write. Have a blessed day.........................
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Date: 12/2/2021 8:47:00 PM
I like it that they decided to harmonize.
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Date: 11/30/2021 5:38:00 AM
They go together the rose and the thorns. Life would be boring otherwise. Your pen always shines, Valsa.
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Valsa George
Date: 12/1/2021 10:25:00 PM
Wise and mature observation ! Life cannot be all roses ! Thanks a lot Vijay!
Date: 11/30/2021 2:58:00 AM
Lovely limerick full of joy and love. ~~
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Valsa George
Date: 12/1/2021 10:24:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it ! Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 11/30/2021 2:47:00 AM
Ha...Loved your limerick dear Valsa...Am happy their sorrows, at last, will end as they both sing "so we shall end our woes".... enjoyed reading. Have a great blessed day. It feels good to read your beautiful poems in Soup. Hugs...~ Ani
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Valsa George
Date: 12/1/2021 10:23:00 PM
Thank you very much Ani. Yes, thus ended their woes... as both were longing for a separation in their heart of hearts !

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