As Love Matures

Couples coming into prime
exhibit an exact prognosis;
passions working overtime
while seeking love in heavy doses.
Never being quite enough
to satisfy their youthful yearning;
time spent lying in the buff
so sensitive to needs discerning.

Couples in their middle age
display a diff’rent kind of story;
passions lack that same old rage
as they once did when in their glory.
Obligations, no time free,
and children clinging to the tether;
“scheduled moments” seem to be 
the only way to come together.

Empty nesters think at last
that time again is their possession;
love will be as in the past
when passions flowed without discretion.
Yet they’re finding other ways 
to fill the moments of their leisure
browsing Facebook in a daze
without a thought of passion’s pleasure.

Couples in their golden years
just holding hands and reminiscing 
‘bout old times, as sunset nears,
recalling flames that now are missing.
Passions that were once the scorch
when ‘tween the sheets were interlocking;
wooden chairs out on the porch
the only things that now are rocking.


May 8, 2021
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Proxenos Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 7:44 AM
And so the cycle of love and life continues, but how desperately lucky we are to have known and have cherished. Love this write John, thank-you for sharing. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Gondolf Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 8:34 AM
Thank you so much, Jenn, I appreciate it. As we sit in our rocking chairs and reminisce we know that we have been truly blessed. Hugs.
Poteet Avatar
June 8, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Great organized thoughts with just the right amount of force and humor. Enjoyed it.
Gondolf Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 2:19 AM
Thanks so much, I’m glad you enjoyed my humorous look at the pleasures of life.
Cheney Avatar
May 17, 2021 at 8:21 AM
I believe you may have outlined things very accurately. I for one have enjoyed the multiple season's of love and passion. I'm not scared of an old wooden rocking chair.
Gondolf Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 2:22 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts and comments, Kenneth, I appreciate it. John
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 12:18 PM
hahaha. Rocking on the porch instead of the "real" rock and rolling. Love that ending. I enjoyed the whole poem. I think in general you hit the nail on the head!
Gondolf Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Your wonderful poem is an honest vignette of the stages we go through as passions wane when age keeps creeping up and up. The spirit is willing but the flesh is weak (Matthew 26:40-43) comes to mind. My husband and I enjoyed a very long time in your first stanza and I am very grateful for that. I have to fave this gem! Blessings xxoo
Gondolf Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 2:13 AM
Thank you so much, Connie, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Your first stanza comment put a smile on my face. Thank you for saving this to your favorites. Hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 7:39 PM
"Just holding hands and reminiscing" Such a beautiful and tender thought. The title alone says it all. "As Love Matures" Yes, I believe it does, the older we get. Passion is there, just in a different way. Your words caress gently around me and my heart. Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 5:13 AM
Thank you, Brandy, for sharing your thoughts on aging love and passion. Hugs, john
Cunningham Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Brilliant and certainly thought provoking John, I suppose as we get older our fires become just a glow. Hope you're well. Tom
Gondolf Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 8:54 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Tom. This is kind of a tongue-in-cheek write on one of the most basic of human emotions. All is well here, still very busy at work. Hope all is well with you. John
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