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As Love Grows Older

Darling, Forty seven years ago, young and in love. We fell in love on the Bobo-lo Boat. A mutual acquaintance arranged our date. I was eighteen and you were twenty. You took my breath away as our eyes met, And I must say Dear, you still do today. Way too young to marry our parents pled mercifully. We insisted, married, and then you went away. The Vietnam War parted us physically, But our love letters tied our hearts- Tears, warm feelings in waiting hearts. Many decades have past since our first date. Love was worth fighting for, being brave for. We've been through the good and the ugly. We've learned, and built, and grew together. I believe our true love conquered it all. I adore seeing old people still in love- Smiling, holding hands, and talking, Opening a door for his sweet girl, A gentle touch and a kiss on her crepe cheek, Then I remember we're the old people, my dear. Our hearts still tied together with love, Even after all these years. Forever Always my darling. For Heather Ober's contest, 'Love Letters' And For Gail Doyle's contest, 'Reflections Of You'

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Date: 5/24/2013 3:44:00 PM
Wonderful love story! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/24/2013 5:58:00 PM
Debbie thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Have a great weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/24/2013 1:54:00 PM
Yep, it's still there! I relate completely. Congratulations!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/24/2013 6:01:00 PM
Roy thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Have a great weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/24/2013 1:32:00 PM
Connie, congratulations on your winning poem... a great "Love Letter" entry. always ~Linda
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/24/2013 6:01:00 PM
Thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Have a great weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/24/2013 11:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Connie xx
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/24/2013 6:05:00 PM
Mandy thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Have a great weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/24/2013 9:26:00 AM
Oh, Wow........this is so close to my own story.......and yes, we too were the same ages as you were when we married all those years ago.....we have endured many hard and wonderful times, just as you ....you told a beautiful story of what real love should be. Wonderful, Connie!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/24/2013 9:47:00 AM
It's is the youthfulness and carefree energies of love that we use to have that I miss. Connie
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/24/2013 9:43:00 AM
(Carrie The last message went to your reply area instead of Heather reply area.) Thank you Carrie for your congratulatory comment. I'd love to have, if not only one day, the innocence of youthfulness that brings vibrant energy. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/24/2013 9:30:00 AM
Thank you for the first place win. I'm happy that you felt the reality and the love I tried to convey in this poem. I truly enjoyed writing about hearts tied together forever and always? Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/24/2013 9:13:00 AM
Connie, this poem is so many things: touching, heartfelt, and so REAL. This is exactly the kind of entry I was hoping for when I created this contest! Big congrats on your 1st place win in my contest :)
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/24/2013 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Heather for my first place win. I appreciate that you thought it worthy enough. It means a lot. Have a great weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/1/2013 4:41:00 PM
very touching and beautiful! how lucky you are!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/2/2013 5:27:00 PM
Yes we are lucky. I have a selfless and very caring husband. Thank you Ilene for stopping by. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/1/2013 2:49:00 PM
This is a tremendous and wonderful write my friend! I am amazed by this significance of this poem, you have brought love to the forefront and filled us with your tenderness of it! What a lovely and loving piece Connie, Great Work!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/2/2013 5:32:00 PM
Thank you Russell you comment touches my heart. We practically grew up together marrying so young. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/1/2013 2:39:00 PM
Superb touching piece !
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/2/2013 5:33:00 PM
Nigel thank you for stopping by and for your wonderful comment much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

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